Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком длинный и немного неструктурированный. Следует избегать повторов и использовать более связные предложения. Также стоит завершить мысль, чтобы ответ был полным и логичным.

例: No, I don't go to the library often because I work full-time as a teacher. The library closes at 8 PM, but my classes finish at 6 PM, and by the time I get home, it's usually already late.

提案: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Следует использовать более точные выражения и связки для улучшения связности.

例: In the library, I usually read the latest books because they provide high-quality materials. Besides that, the library offers facilities like computers and a lounge where people can relax.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующее слово для плавности и немного расширить ответ, чтобы он был более информативным.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because there wasn't one in my hometown. However, when I moved to the city as a teenager, I started using the library frequently to study and read books.

提案: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать более точные формулировки и связки, а также избегать повторов.

例: I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because they are well-organized and value education. Visiting the library is likely a part of their daily routine to do homework and expand their knowledge.

× I use it for reading the latest book which is provides in a good quality.

✓ I use it for reading the latest book which is provided in good quality.

The verb 'provides' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the past participle 'provided' to describe the book. This is a 'There be issue' because the sentence structure requires a passive form to indicate the book is supplied or made available in good quality.

× They seem like so well organized and clever.

✓ They seem so well organized and clever.

The phrase 'seem like so well organized' is incorrect; 'like' should be omitted because 'seem' is a linking verb and should be followed directly by the adjective phrase. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/phrases affecting sentence clarity.

× So I think it's the one of parts of their daily routine, visiting library, doing their homework, expanding their knowledge.

✓ So I think it's one of the parts of their daily routine: visiting the library, doing their homework, expanding their knowledge.

The phrase 'the one of parts' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the parts'. Also, 'visiting library' needs the definite article 'the'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and articles affecting the meaning and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think they visited a lot.

✓ Yes, I think they visit a lot.

The question is about current habits ('Do Chinese kids often go to the library?'), so the present tense 'visit' should be used instead of past tense 'visited'. This is a past tense issue where the tense does not match the context.