Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。英語の基本的な文構造を意識し、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。また、冗長な表現を避け、質問に直接答えることが重要です。

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it difficult to study there and I am not allowed to eat or drink inside.

提案: 回答が意味不明で文法的に成立していません。質問に対して直接的かつ具体的に答え、文を完結させる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげることも意識してください。

例: I usually read books and take notes in the library because it is a quiet place to study.

提案: 回答は部分的に意味が通じますが、文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。過去形の使い方を正しくし、具体的な例を明確に述べるようにしましょう。

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I used to borrow DVDs like "Prince of Stars" and children's books.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤っています。自分の意見をはっきり述べ、理由を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話すことも大切です。

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because studying is considered important in China.

× I merely go to there because I can't study and eat, eat, drink there.

✓ I merely go there because I can't study, eat, or drink there.

The phrase 'go to there' is incorrect because 'there' is an adverb of place and does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go there'. Also, the sentence needed commas and conjunctions to separate the activities properly.

× I use books for.

✓ I use books.

The phrase 'use books for' is incomplete and incorrect. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here without an object. The sentence should simply be 'I use books.'

× Crossed and I did this so I write the post.

✓ I crossed out some parts and did this so I could write the post.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper subject-verb agreement and conjunctions. The corrected sentence clarifies the actions and uses appropriate verb tenses and conjunctions.

× I use a DVD, for example, Prince, Prince of Stars and books for kids.

✓ I used DVDs, for example, 'Prince of Stars,' and books for kids.

The question is about past habits, so the past tense 'used' is appropriate. Also, 'DVD' should be plural if referring to multiple items. Titles should be properly punctuated.

× I think they often go to the library because.

✓ I think they often go to the library because studying is important.

The original sentence ends abruptly and lacks a complete reason. Also, 'study is important' is more natural than 'didn't think study is important' in this context.