Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như 'can reading' và 'peace peaceful'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ như 'I go to the library' nhiều lần. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy reading. I usually go there daily to read in a quiet and peaceful environment.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ 'I usually read' thay vì 'I usually reading') và tránh lặp từ như 'usually'. Hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về sở thích của bạn.

例: I usually read books in the library, especially manga such as Conan and Doraemon, because I find them very interesting and entertaining.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I was' thay vì 'I were', 'there were not many libraries' thay vì 'it is not many library'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý.

例: I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my city. However, I sometimes went with my parents to borrow books.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh đưa ra nhận xét không cần thiết hoặc không phù hợp như 'Am I the Vietnamese kid?'. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, lịch sự và có cấu trúc tốt hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe many of them often visit the library to study and gain new knowledge.

× When I go to there, I can reading books in a quiet atmosphere and peace peaceful.

✓ When I go there, I can read books in a quiet and peaceful atmosphere.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates a place. Also, 'can reading' is incorrect; 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'read'. Additionally, 'peace peaceful' is redundant and incorrect; 'peaceful' alone correctly describes the atmosphere.

× I usually reading books, especially manga like Conan and Doraemon because it's very interesting.

✓ I usually read books, especially manga like Conan and Doraemon because they're very interesting.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form 'read' instead of the '-ing' form 'reading'. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural noun 'manga'.

× So I usually go to the library to read this anime books.

✓ So I usually go to the library to read these anime books.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular, but 'books' is plural, so 'these' should be used to match the plural noun.

× I didn't go to the library when I were a kid because it is not many library in my city.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my city.

The subject 'I' requires the past tense verb 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, 'it is not many library' is incorrect; the correct form is 'there were not many libraries' to indicate quantity in the past.

× However, I sometimes go to the library with my parents to borrow book.

✓ However, I sometimes go to the library with my parents to borrow books.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because borrowing usually involves more than one book or is general. Also, 'borrow book' is ungrammatical without an article or plural form.

× Am I the Vietnamese kid? So I'm not sure about that.

✓ Am I a Vietnamese kid? So I'm not sure about that.

The sentence is a question and needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'Vietnamese kid' to be grammatically correct.