Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating "English" twice and try to combine ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your reasons and frequency.

例: Yes, I often go to the library about three or four times a week because I want to improve my English speaking skills and grammar.

提案: Try to reduce filler words like "uh" and "you know" to sound more fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, explain what you do first, then why you prefer the library.

例: In the library, I usually study English and listen to audio lessons. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better than at home, so I prefer studying there.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct past tense forms and avoid repeating negatives. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by a reason using linking words.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because my parents never encouraged me to study there.

提案: Avoid vague words like "speculate" and be more confident in your opinion. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study and believe that learning helps them become better individuals.

× Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to library because my parents didn't told me it's better to go there and study lessons.

✓ Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to the library because my parents didn't tell me it's better to go there and study lessons.

The verb 'didn't' is already in the past tense, so the main verb following it should be in the base form. 'Didn't told' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't tell'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to library because my parents didn't told me it's better to go there and study lessons.

✓ Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to the library because my parents didn't tell me it's better to go there and study lessons.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× So no I don't have any experience in doing.

✓ So no, I don't have any experience doing that.

The phrase 'experience in doing' is awkward and incomplete. It is better to say 'experience doing that' to clearly express the idea. Also, a comma after 'So no' improves clarity.