Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add a reason. For example, say 'I sometimes go to the library because I like to read books.' Avoid unclear phrases like 'I have no sure I forgot.'

例: I sometimes go to the library because I enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet place.

提案: Answer directly and use correct grammar. In English (Cambodia), say 'I usually read books and learn new things in the library.' Use linking words if you add more details, like 'because' or 'so that.'

例: I usually read books and learn new things in the library because it helps me improve my knowledge.

提案: Try to make your answer clear and grammatically correct. In English (Cambodia), say 'No, I did not go to the library as a child because my parents did not take me there. Also, we did not have enough money.' Avoid repeating phrases and unclear words like 'I'm a kind.'

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because my parents did not take me there, and we did not have enough money.

提案: Answer directly and use correct grammar. In English (Cambodia), say 'I don't know because I have never seen Chinese kids go to the library.' Use linking words like 'because' to explain your answer.

例: I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library because I have never seen them there.

× Sometime I go to the library because I have no sure I forgot.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library because I'm not sure, I forgot.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'I have no sure' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not sure'. The sentence needs a comma before 'I forgot' to separate the clauses.

× I go to read book and find an experience for study.

✓ I go to read books and gain experience for studying.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general. 'Find an experience' is unnatural; 'gain experience' is better. 'For study' should be 'for studying' to use the gerund form after 'for'.

× No, because my mom, my dad, they don't bring me to there because I'm a kind and they have no money for bring me to there.

✓ No, because my mom and dad didn't bring me there because I'm a kid and they had no money to bring me there.

The phrase 'bring me to there' is incorrect; 'bring me there' is correct. 'I'm a kind' should be 'I'm a kid'. Also, 'have no money for bring me' should be 'had no money to bring me'. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and tense consistency.

× I don't know because I never see them to go to library.

✓ I don't know because I have never seen them go to the library.

The phrase 'never see them to go' is incorrect; it should be 'have never seen them go'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'.