Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to use correct prepositions and articles, and make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say "I often like to go to the library" instead of "go to library". Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I often go to the library. There is a library room in my office where I usually go during lunch breaks. On weekends, I visit the local community library to read and relax.

提案: Your answer is generally good but has some grammatical mistakes and filler words like "uh". Try to avoid fillers and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books, especially novels, because I find them very engaging. Sometimes, I also read newspapers to stay updated with current events.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and filler words. Try to give a direct answer with clear sentences and avoid fillers. Also, explain your answer with specific details.

例: I don't remember going to the library much when I was a kid. However, I started visiting the library regularly when I was in high school because I needed books for my studies.

提案: Your answer is not appropriate because it does not directly answer the question and includes irrelevant information. Try to give a polite and general answer if you don't know, and avoid repeating phrases.

例: I'm not sure about that because I haven't had much interaction with Chinese children. However, I believe many kids enjoy going to the library to read and learn.

× Of course, I often like to go to library.

✓ Of course, I often like to go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. In English, we use 'the' before singular countable nouns when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Uh, in my office there is a separate room for the library, so when lunch time I go there and the weekends I go the near community hall to visit the LA library.

✓ Uh, in my office there is a separate room for the library, so at lunchtime I go there and on weekends I go to the nearby community hall to visit the LA library.

The phrase 'when lunch time' should be 'at lunchtime' to correctly express time. Also, 'the weekends' should be 'on weekends' to indicate habitual action. 'Go the near community hall' is missing the preposition 'to' and 'near' should be 'nearby' as an adjective modifying 'community hall'.

× When I go to the library, I like to the read the books, especially related to the novels, uh, because I deeply engage when I read the novels and sometimes I also like to read the newspapers.

✓ When I go to the library, I like to read books, especially those related to novels, because I deeply engage when I read novels and sometimes I also like to read newspapers.

'Like to the read the books' has an unnecessary 'the' before 'read'. Also, 'the books' and 'the novels' are too general; 'books' and 'novels' without 'the' are more natural here. 'Especially related to the novels' is unclear; 'especially those related to novels' clarifies the meaning.

× I have no good memory about about the library when I was a kid, but when I I'm at the great pipe, umm, I've started to go to the library.

✓ I have no good memory about the library when I was a kid, but when I was at the great pipe, I started to go to the library.

'I've started' is present perfect, but the context is past time, so simple past 'I started' is correct. 'When I I'm at the great pipe' is ungrammatical; it should be 'when I was at the great pipe'. Also, repeated 'about' is a typo.

× Oh, I have no idea about that because I I don't engage with the Chinese people and they're good. So I have no idea about that.

✓ Oh, I have no idea about that because I don't engage with Chinese people and they're good. So I have no idea about that.

Repeated 'I' is a typo. 'The Chinese people' is incorrect here; 'Chinese people' without 'the' is the correct general reference. The sentence is otherwise correct.