Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, correct small errors such as 'quite' instead of 'quiet' and 'cheap away' which is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'. Keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library to prepare for my exams and read books because it is a quiet place that helps me avoid distractions. I also like borrowing books since it is very affordable.

提案: Make sure to use correct verb forms, for example, 'I usually read books' instead of 'I usually reading books'. Avoid repeating the same idea; instead, add variety and detail. Use linking words like 'and' to connect your activities. Try to expand your answer with specific details to make it more interesting and natural.

例: In the library, I usually read books and prepare for my exams because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate better.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using past tense consistently and adding linking words for coherence. For example, use 'there was no library' instead of 'there is no library'. Also, avoid repeating 'library' too often by using pronouns. Keep your answer concise and natural.

例: No, there wasn't a library in my village when I was a kid, so I didn't have the chance to visit one. However, now I go to the library very often.

提案: Avoid incomplete sentences and filler phrases like 'I don't know' which reduce the effectiveness of your answer. Provide a clear opinion with supporting details. Use linking words to explain your answer logically. Try to be more specific about why it is popular or how often kids go to the library.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library nowadays because many schools encourage reading, and libraries offer a wide range of books and resources that help with their studies.

× It is very quite place to avoid distractions and also I like to borrow books because it's very cheap away.

✓ It is a very quiet place to avoid distractions and also I like to borrow books because it's very cheap.

The adjective 'quite' was incorrectly used instead of 'quiet'. Also, the phrase 'cheap away' is incorrect; 'cheap' alone suffices. Additionally, the article 'a' is needed before 'very quiet place' to be grammatically correct.

× In the library, I usually reading books and uh, prepare for my exams.

✓ In the library, I usually read books and prepare for my exams.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. After adverbs of frequency like 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'read' is correct here.

× Uh, it's very good place to read books.

✓ Uh, it's a very good place to read books.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very good place'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article.

× No, actually there is no library in my village at that time, so I don't have any chance to go to the library as a kid.

✓ No, actually there was no library in my village at that time, so I didn't have any chance to go to the library as a kid.

The tense is inconsistent. Since the time referred to is in the past, 'there is' should be 'there was'. Also, 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to match past tense context.

× But now I go library very often.

✓ But now I go to the library very often.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'library', and 'library' is a singular countable noun that requires an article 'the' in this context.