Library— Part 1 採点レポート

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例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books on my phone. It's more convenient to carry my phone everywhere, so I can read anytime. Libraries are not very popular with me.

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例: Usually, I choose some books or do research in the library because I try to find important information that I cannot find on the internet.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит ошибки в временах и структуре предложений. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более связные предложения.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I liked going to the library. I chose books with fairy tales, took them home to read, and then returned them to get new ones.

提案: Ваш ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует давать более уверенный и структурированный ответ, избегая неопределенных выражений.

例: I am not sure, but since China is a well-educated country, I think many Chinese kids go to the library regularly.

× I prefer to read books at my phone, so I don't know digital.

✓ I prefer to read books on my phone, so I know digital ones.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to using a device; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate reading on a phone. Also, 'I don't know digital' is unclear and likely a misuse; it should be 'I know digital ones' to mean digital books.

× Digital one it's easier for me to be every time with a book.

✓ Digital ones are easier for me because I can always have a book with me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Digital one it's easier' is incorrect; the subject and verb do not agree, and the sentence structure is confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects subject-verb agreement.

× As for library, it's not very popular thing for for me.

✓ As for the library, it's not a very popular thing for me.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify it. Also, 'for for me' is a repetition error; only one 'for' is needed.

× Usually in the library I choose some books or make some researchers.

✓ Usually in the library, I choose some books or do some research.

'Make some researchers' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'do some research'. Also, a comma after 'library' improves readability.

× I try to find important information in for me, which I couldn't find at the web websites or in the in the Internet.

✓ I try to find important information for myself, which I couldn't find on websites or on the Internet.

The phrase 'in for me' is incorrect; 'for myself' is appropriate. Also, 'at the web websites' should be 'on websites', and 'in the in the Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. Prepositions 'on' are used with websites and the Internet.

× Yes, when I was a kid, I'd like to go to the library.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I liked to go to the library.

'I'd like' is a contraction of 'I would like' and is used for present or future desires, not past habits. The past tense 'liked' correctly indicates a past habit.

× I choose books with fairy tales and so on.

✓ I chose books with fairy tales and so on.

'Choose' is present tense; since the context is past, 'chose' is correct. Also, 'books' is plural and correct here.

× I took it to my home, read the read there and then come back and change for another one.

✓ I took them home, read there, then came back and exchanged them for another one.

The verbs should be in past tense: 'took', 'read' (pronounced as 'red'), 'came', and 'exchanged'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'books'. 'Change for another one' is better expressed as 'exchanged them for another one'.

× Yeah, I don't know for sure, but Chinese is a very well educated nation, so I hope that their kids will go to library, but I'm not sure how often.

✓ Yeah, I don't know for sure, but China is a very well-educated nation, so I hope that their kids will go to the library, but I'm not sure how often.

'Chinese' refers to people or language; the country name 'China' is needed here. 'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'Well educated' should be hyphenated as 'well-educated' when used as an adjective.

× But on my view, sometimes they go.

✓ But in my view, sometimes they go.

'On my view' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'in my view'.