Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免时间混淆，保持时态一致，并且句子结构更自然流畅。可以直接回答是否经常去图书馆，然后补充原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I don't often go to the library when I'm not busy. However, as a university student, I usually visit the library during final exams to study because it provides a quiet environment.

提案: 回答中时态混乱且表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，保持时态一致，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: When I am free, I like to read interesting books such as comedies or science fiction in the library. However, when I am busy, I focus on studying to prepare for exams.

提案: 回答中出现了代词混淆和语法错误。建议使用正确的代词和时态，并且句子结构更清晰。

例: Yes, my mom and I used to go to the library on weekends. While she worked, I would do my schoolwork and homework. We both enjoyed the quiet atmosphere there.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子断裂。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: I think it depends on the individual. If a child likes reading or needs to prepare for exams, they often go to the library to study.

× I didn't go to library often.

✓ I didn't go to the library often.

这里缺少定冠词'the'，'library'是特指的地方名词，前面需要加定冠词。

× When in final of the term I always go to the library to study.

✓ When it is the final of the term, I always go to the library to study.

缺少主语和动词，'When in final of the term'结构不完整，应补充主语和动词使句子完整。

× There are a lot of things I can do in the library when I was free and don't under pressure.

✓ There are a lot of things I can do in the library when I am free and not under pressure.

时态不一致，描述现在的情况应使用现在时，且'don't under pressure'表达不完整，应改为'not under pressure'。

× But when I was when when I am busy, I just can study.

✓ But when I am busy, I can only study.

时态混乱，前后时态不一致，应统一使用现在时；'just can study'表达不自然，应改为'can only study'。

× Actually, I my mom and I went to a library at weekends.

✓ Actually, my mom and I went to the library at weekends.

'a library'应改为'the library'表示特指；且句中多余的'I'应删除。

× He or she did her work and I deal with my schoolwork and homework.

✓ She did her work and I dealt with my schoolwork and homework.

代词使用不当，前文提到的是'my mom'，应使用'she'；时态应统一为过去时。

× Both of us liked the library because it's quiet.

✓ Both of us liked the library because it was quiet.

描述过去的情况，'it's'应改为过去时'it was'。

× I think it depends on. Particular person If someone like to read books or need to prepare for an exam, he or she may go to the library.

✓ I think it depends on the particular person. If someone likes to read books or needs to prepare for an exam, he or she may go to the library.

句子结构不完整，'depends on'后应接宾语；'like'和'need'应加第三人称单数形式。