Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to one or two sentences with clear structure.

例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends because there is one close to my house that I find very convenient.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific about your activities. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to express your thoughts more naturally.

例: Whenever I visit the library, I usually read magazines about celebrities and comic books, which help me relax and enjoy some laughter.

提案: There are grammatical mistakes in your answer, such as incorrect verb forms. Also, avoid unnecessary details like 'AB library' if it is not relevant. Keep your answer direct and clear with proper grammar.

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I wasn't aware of it.

提案: Your answer is honest but could be improved by adding a brief explanation or general comment to show your ability to discuss the topic. Try to expand your answer slightly while remaining relevant.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in my country, many kids visit the library regularly to study and read books.

× Yes, I love go like to go to the library especially during my weekends.

✓ Yes, I love going to the library especially during my weekends.

The verb 'love' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'Love go like to go' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'love going'. This improves fluency and grammatical correctness.

× I used to go to library which is nearer to my house.

✓ I used to go to the library which is nearer to my house.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× Whenever I go to library, I find out a different kind of magazines which is related to the celebrities as well as, uh, comic books by which I get to know about the laughter at the same time.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I find different kinds of magazines which are related to celebrities as well as, uh, comic books by which I get to know about laughter at the same time.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'a different kind of magazines' is incorrect because 'magazines' is plural; it should be 'different kinds of magazines'. The verb 'is' should agree with the plural subject 'magazines' and 'comic books', so 'are' is correct. 'Find out' is better replaced with 'find' in this context.

× When I was a kid I was unaware about library, so I didn't went to AB library in my childhood.

✓ When I was a kid I was unaware of the library, so I didn't go to AB library in my childhood.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'went' is incorrect; it should be 'go'. Also, 'unaware about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'unaware of'. 'Library' as a singular countable noun requires an article; 'the library' is appropriate here.