Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「lend lend the book」の繰り返しや、「For studying because library is mainly quiet」という不自然な表現を改善しましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然で流暢な回答を目指してください。

例: Yes, I often go to the library, but not to borrow books. I mainly use it for studying because it is usually quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: 回答が不完全で文法的に不自然な部分があります。例えば、「I often use for」という表現は意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な活動内容を述べると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文を論理的に繋げる練習をしてください。

例: As I mentioned, I usually study in the library, especially before exams. However, sometimes it can be crowded because many students want to use it.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I was kids」や「I sometimes bore not only books」という表現は誤りです。正しい時制と語彙を使い、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。また、冗長な繰り返しは避けてください。

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child. Although there was no big library near my house, I often visited a small one. I enjoyed reading picture books, which left a strong impression on me.

提案: 回答が不完全で文法的に不自然です。「by referring but so by thinking about my experience」という部分は意味が不明瞭で、文を最後まで完結させていません。質問に対して明確に答え、論理的に話を展開する練習をしましょう。

例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but based on my own experience, I believe many of them visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× However, my main purpose is not to lend lend the book.

✓ However, my main purpose is not to lend books.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because the context implies lending books in general, not just one book. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For studying because library is mainly quiet, so the place is suitable for me to study.

✓ For studying because the library is mainly quiet, so the place is suitable for me to study.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. This is an article error.

× I mainly do study at library, uh, and for example, before the test.

✓ I mainly study at the library, uh, and for example, before the test.

The preposition 'at' is correct but 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'do study' is unnecessary; 'study' alone is sufficient. This is an article error and sentence structure improvement.

× Before the test I often go to the library, but there is no limitation because many students want to use the library, so I often use for.

✓ Before the test I often go to the library, but there is no limitation because many students want to use the library, so I often use it.

The phrase 'I often use for' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I often use it' referring to the library. This is a sentence structure error and pronoun usage issue.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was kids because nearby my house there is no big library, so I often went to there and I sometimes bore not only books, but the book with pictures and I really enjoyed to read it.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because near my house there was no big library, so I often went there and I sometimes borrowed not only books, but books with pictures and I really enjoyed reading them.

'Kids' should be singular 'a kid' to match 'I was'. 'Nearby' should be 'near'. 'Went to there' should be 'went there'. 'Bore' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'borrowed'. 'The book with pictures' should be plural 'books with pictures'. 'Enjoyed to read' should be 'enjoyed reading'. These are singular/plural, preposition, verb tense, and verb form issues.

× I'm not sure about the Chinese kids, but as I mentioned, I went to the library many times when I was kids.

✓ I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but as I mentioned, I went to the library many times when I was a kid.

'When I was kids' is incorrect because 'I' is singular; it should be 'a kid'. Also, 'the Chinese kids' can be better as 'Chinese kids' without 'the'. This is a singular/plural and article usage issue.

× I think Chinese children go to library a lot as well and.

✓ I think Chinese children go to the library a lot as well.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected accordingly. This is an article error and sentence structure error.