Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, такие как "I got more feelings" и незавершённое предложение. Рекомендуется использовать более точные и грамматически правильные фразы, а также избегать незавершённых мыслей.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. Reading helps me relax and feel more connected to the stories, especially when I am tired after a long day.

提案: В вашем ответе есть ошибки в грамматике и повторения, например, "I usually reading books" и "to relax to reading books". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать повторов.

例: Usually, I read books in the library to relax when I feel tired. Sometimes, I also walk around to find interesting books to read later.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, например, "I like to went" и повторение "in my childhood". Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более разнообразную лексику.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I enjoyed going to the library because I loved reading books, articles, and especially comics, which I found very fascinating.

提案: Ответ содержит противоречия и грамматические ошибки, например, "Chinese is developing country" и "a lot of Chinese kids are don't go". Следует избегать противоречивых утверждений и использовать правильную грамматику.

例: I think that nowadays, some Chinese kids still go to the library, but many prefer reading at home because of the convenience of digital books and the internet.

× When I read books I got more feelings, emotions and usually I go to the library to relax, especially when I'm so tired or when I'm So that's all.

✓ When I read books I get more feelings and emotions, and usually I go to the library to relax, especially when I'm so tired. That's all.

The verb 'got' is incorrectly used in the past tense here; the present tense 'get' is appropriate because the sentence describes a habitual action. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed punctuation for clarity.

× Well, personally speaking, I usually reading books in the library.

✓ Well, personally speaking, I usually read books in the library.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; the base form 'read' should be used after adverbs of frequency like 'usually'.

× I go to library to relax to reading books, especially when I'm tired as well as I'm walking in the library and look for books.

✓ I go to the library to relax by reading books, especially when I'm tired, as well as walking in the library and looking for books.

The phrase 'to reading books' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' followed by the gerund 'reading'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the'. Additionally, parallel structure requires 'walking' and 'looking'.

× I like to went to the library because since my childhood I'm keen on reading books, reading articles or other comics.

✓ I liked to go to the library because since my childhood I've been keen on reading books, articles, or comics.

The verb 'went' is incorrectly used after 'to like to'; the base form 'go' should be used. Also, 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'since my childhood'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and tense consistency.

× a lot of Chinese kids are don't go to the library.

✓ a lot of Chinese kids don't go to the library.

The phrase 'are don't go' is incorrect; the auxiliary verb 'are' should be removed. The correct negative form is 'don't go' for plural subjects.