Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些冗长且语法不够准确，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法结构。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体理由支持。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on studying. I also enjoy reading novels there, which help me learn new things and relax.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用简单句表达清楚自己的活动，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: In the library, I usually read books, especially novels. I find it easier to concentrate there than at home, so I often study in a quiet environment.

提案: 回答中表达混乱且有语法错误，建议先明确回答，再用简洁句子说明原因和细节，避免重复和不连贯。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I preferred reading books to playing games or using phones. I also enjoyed going there with my friends to discuss different books.

提案: 回答内容不相关且表达不清，建议直接回答问题并给出具体原因，避免无关信息。

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because it is a good place to learn about different cultures and history. Libraries also provide a quiet environment for studying.

× I often go to the library in my spare time because it's a peaceful place to study and I like different kinds of books, such as the novels, which make me to learn more, learn some new things and make me feel relaxing.

✓ I often go to the library in my spare time because it's a peaceful place to study and I like different kinds of books, such as novels, which help me learn more, learn new things, and make me feel relaxed.

动词后面不需要加不定式to，应该直接用动词原形或动名词形式。这里的 'make me to learn' 应改为 'help me learn'，'make me feel relaxing' 应改为 'make me feel relaxed'，因为 'feel' 后面接形容词表示感受。

× I usually watch the books in the library because I like different kinds of books, such as the novels make me to in missing it and I really like to study in it because I think it's a learning environment and I can concentrate better than at home.

✓ I usually read books in the library because I like different kinds of books, such as novels, which make me interested in them, and I really like studying there because I think it's a good learning environment and I can concentrate better than at home.

'watch the books' 用词错误，应为 'read books'。'make me to in missing it' 结构混乱，应改为 'make me interested in them'。'like to study in it' 改为 'like studying there' 更自然。

× Yes, I really like to go to the library when I was a kid because I like I didn't like to play games or and watch the phones, but I really like to watch books in the year and I can.

✓ Yes, I really liked to go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't like to play games or watch phones, but I really liked to read books there.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如 'liked'。'watch the phones' 用词错误，应为 'watch phones' 或 'use phones'。'watch books' 应为 'read books'。

× I really like to go to there with my friends.

✓ I really like to go there with my friends.

'go to there' 是错误搭配，'go' 后面直接加地点副词 'there'，不需要介词 'to'。

× sometimes it's a Chinese has money like old and different cultures and they have different kind of rules and our children like to watch it.

✓ Sometimes, Chinese people have many old and different cultures, and they have different kinds of rules, so our children like to read there.

句子结构混乱，'it's a Chinese has money like old' 不通顺，应改为 'Chinese people have many old and different cultures'。'different kind' 应为复数 'different kinds'。'like to watch it' 应改为 'like to read there'。