Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and fluent by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it a quiet place to study for my exams. Additionally, I sometimes use it to complete paperwork and work on my research projects.

提案: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer without hesitation. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, correct grammar mistakes and clarify your activities in the library.

例: I usually study English in the library because I need to prepare for my English exams. Sometimes, I also read books available there to improve my language skills.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and completing sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library every weekend with my sister because our parents encouraged us to study there. We also borrowed useful books to help with our lessons.

提案: Avoid vague statements and generalizations. Provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents emphasize the importance of education and hard work. For example, they use the library to study and complete homework.

× sometimes I go to the library, uh, for do some paperwork and umm, doing my research projects.

✓ sometimes I go to the library, uh, to do some paperwork and umm, to do my research projects.

The verb 'do' should be in the infinitive form 'to do' after 'for' to indicate purpose. Also, 'doing' should be changed to 'to do' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form after 'for'.

× I usually study English in library because I have to take some exams, uh, regarding my English score and uh, some other time I reading bookstore.

✓ I usually study English in the library because I have to take some exams, uh, regarding my English score and, uh, sometimes I read in the bookstore.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. The phrase 'some other time I reading bookstore' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes I read in the bookstore' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× sometimes we borrow some useful books from.

✓ sometimes we borrow some useful books from there.

The preposition 'from' requires an object to complete the phrase. Adding 'there' clarifies the source from which books are borrowed.

× Chinese people are well known as they're hardworking and I think their children will go to the library.

✓ Chinese people are well known for being hardworking and I think their children often go to the library.

The phrase 'well known as' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'well known for'. Also, 'they're' is unnecessary here and 'will go' is changed to 'often go' to better express habitual action.