Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word choices like 'worthy'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Honestly, I don't go to the library very often because I prefer buying books. Also, I find reading less interesting, so I usually spend my time on other activities.

提案: Your answer is too short and contains a mistake ('my library' instead of 'the library'). Provide more details and use linking words to make your answer more natural and informative.

例: When I go to the library, I usually spend time reading books or studying quietly because it is a peaceful environment.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and add linking words to improve coherence. Provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

例: Honestly, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I spent most of my time playing with friends or using the computer.

提案: Your answer is relevant but repetitive with 'I think' used multiple times. Try to vary your expressions and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific reasons or examples.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often visit libraries because the education system is very competitive, so they need to study hard and improve their knowledge regularly.

× And to be honest, I'm not going to library very often 'cause I just buy my books currently and I actually don't enjoy reading books because it's quite boring and worthy.

✓ And to be honest, I'm not going to the library very often 'cause I just buy my books currently and I actually don't enjoy reading books because it's quite boring and worthy.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place like 'the library'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually read books in my library.

✓ I usually read books in the library.

When referring to a public place like a library, the definite article 'the' is used. Saying 'my library' is unusual unless referring to a personal or private library, so 'the library' is more appropriate here.

× Honestly I don't. I didn't go to library when I was a child because I just spending my time with my friends or sitting in front of the computer with my whole childhood.

✓ Honestly, I didn't. I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I just spent my time with my friends or sat in front of the computer throughout my whole childhood.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past context; 'didn't' is correct for past. Also, 'spending' should be past tense 'spent' to match past time frame. 'Sitting' should be 'sat' for past tense. 'To library' needs 'the' article. 'With my whole childhood' is awkward; 'throughout my whole childhood' is better.

× Honestly I don't. I didn't go to library when I was a child because I just spending my time with my friends or sitting in front of the computer with my whole childhood.

✓ Honestly, I didn't. I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I just spent my time with my friends or sat in front of the computer throughout my whole childhood.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.