Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains incomplete sentences and redundancy ('Additionally, I. Additionally, there is, there is.'). To improve, avoid repeating phrases and complete your thoughts clearly. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question, using linking words appropriately.

例: No, I rarely visit the library because I find it more convenient to read yearbooks or online articles at home. Moreover, I can access a wider range of materials online without having to travel.

提案: Your answer addresses the question and provides supporting details, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by varying vocabulary. Also, try to avoid listing activities without clear connections.

例: I usually go to the library to enjoy reading books and magazines because it helps me focus. Additionally, I use this time to learn new vocabulary and practice my speaking skills by reading aloud.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains a grammatical error ('I start' should be 'I started'). To improve, use correct verb tenses and provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid. I started visiting the library when I began learning English to find more resources and practice.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete ('I think that.' is unfinished). To improve, complete your thoughts and add specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in cities where libraries are more accessible. I think this is because parents encourage reading to support their children's education.

× Additionally, I. Additionally, there is, there is.

✓ Additionally, I prefer it because it is more convenient.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive, lacking a clear structure. It should be a complete sentence expressing the student's preference, avoiding repetition and fragments.

× No, I start going to the library when I started learning English.

✓ No, I started going to the library when I started learning English.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I started learning English.' Mixing present tense 'start' with past tense 'started' is incorrect.