Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and use articles properly, for example, say 'the library' instead of 'library'. Also, try to make your answer concise and clear.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I really enjoy the quiet environment and the smell of books.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I usually read books or spend time with my friends because being around them makes me feel comfortable.'

例: I usually read books in the library or spend time with my friends because being around them makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use past tense correctly and avoid unnecessary words. For example, say 'No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my school didn't have one.'

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my school didn't have a library.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. If you are unsure, say so politely. For example, 'I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I know Nepali kids usually do because they love reading.'

例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I know Nepali kids usually do because they love reading.

× yes I do go to library because I really love the environment of library and the smell of the book

✓ yes I do go to the library because I really love the environment of the library and the smell of the books

In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. 'Library' and 'book' are countable nouns here, so 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'books' should be plural to match the context.

× I often read books in the library or enjoy with my friends

✓ I often read books in the library or enjoy time with my friends

The verb 'enjoy' is usually followed directly by the object or by a gerund, not by the preposition 'with'. Saying 'enjoy time with my friends' is correct.

× Surrounding my my friends is really feel good to me and it's really comforting

✓ Being around my friends really feels good to me and it's really comforting

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word order. 'Being around my friends' is the correct subject phrase, and 'feels' agrees with the singular subject.

× No, I don't. Used to go library when I was a kid because there wasn't any library I guess

✓ No, I didn't. I used to go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't any library, I guess

The negative past tense of 'do' is 'didn't', not 'don't'. Also, 'used to' requires the base verb form and 'to the library' needs the preposition 'to' and article 'the'.

× The school where I used to study, there wasn't any facilities of library

✓ The school where I used to study didn't have any library facilities

The phrase 'facilities of library' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'library facilities'. Also, 'there wasn't any' is better replaced with 'didn't have any' for clarity.

× That's why I didn't go library to the

✓ That's why I didn't go to the library

The phrase 'go library to the' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go to the library' with the preposition 'to' and the article 'the' before 'library'.

× I don't have that much idea of Chinese kids go to library or not because I'm on a place

✓ I don't have much idea whether Chinese kids go to the library or not because I'm in a different place

The phrase 'idea of Chinese kids go' is incorrect; it should be 'idea whether Chinese kids go'. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the'. 'I'm on a place' should be 'I'm in a different place'.

× if I would get any chance to talk about Netflix kids then they do love reading so Nepali kids always go over library

✓ If I get any chance to talk about Nepali kids, then I would say they do love reading, so Nepali kids always go to the library

The sentence has incorrect conditional structure and word order. 'If I would get' should be 'If I get'. 'Netflix kids' seems to be a mistake for 'Nepali kids'. 'Go over library' should be 'go to the library'.