Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但存在语法错误和重复，如“everyone are everyone is”。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时可以用更丰富的词汇描述图书馆的氛围。

例: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy the peaceful environment where everyone is focused on studying or reading. This quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate better on my projects.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“I always finish. I always do”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意时态和句子结构，同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: When I was in junior and senior high school, I usually completed my homework in the library on weekends. Now, as a university student, I mainly work on my long-term projects there.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“I I like play Lego”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复，同时可以更具体地说明原因。

例: Not really. When I was a child, I didn't enjoy reading books much and preferred playing with Lego at home. Also, my parents were often busy, so they rarely took me to the library.

提案: 回答中重复使用“I think”，建议减少重复表达，使用更丰富的词汇和句型，同时可以提供更多具体细节。

例: I don't think so because many Chinese children have numerous extra classes on weekends, leaving them little time to visit the library. I hope they can have more opportunities to go there.

× In the library everyone are everyone is studying or reading books and I really like the quiet atmosphere which can make me focus on my project very well.

✓ In the library everyone is studying or reading books and I really like the quiet atmosphere which can make me focus on my project very well.

句子中主语是单数everyone，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式is，而不是are。主谓一致错误。

× When I was in the junior high school or Senior High School, I always finished my homework in the library at weekend.

✓ When I was in junior high school or senior high school, I always finished my homework in the library at weekends.

“at weekend”应为复数形式“at weekends”，表示每个周末。学校名称前不需要冠词。

× But now I'm a university student, I always finish. I always do my long term project in the library.

✓ But now I'm a university student, I always finish. I always do my long-term project in the library.

“long term”作为形容词应连写为“long-term”。

× I think not really because when I was a kid I don't really like reading books and I I like play Lego at home more than reading.

✓ I think not really because when I was a kid I didn't really like reading books and I liked playing Lego at home more than reading.

描述过去的习惯应使用过去时态，动词“like”应改为“liked”，且“play”应改为动名词“playing”。

× Besides, my parents have not many time much time to bring me to the library so I have no chance to go.

✓ Besides, my parents don't have much time to bring me to the library so I have no chance to go.

“have not many time”表达错误，应使用“don't have much time”，因为time是不可数名词，需用“much”而非“many”。

× I think no, because I think many kids in China have a lot of extra courses at weekends, so I think they have not much time in the library.

✓ I think no, because I think many kids in China have a lot of extra courses at weekends, so I think they don't have much time in the library.

否定句中应使用助动词“do”构成否定，“have not much time”应改为“don't have much time”。