Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تستخدم جمل أقصر وأكثر وضوح، وابتعد عن التكرار. مثلاً، قل "I often went to the library in college because it was quiet and helped me focus on studying and completing assignments."

例: I often went to the library in college because it was quiet and helped me focus on studying and completing assignments.

提案: حاول تستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة بدون تردد، وابتعد عن الكلمات غير الضرورية مثل "umm". مثلاً، قل "I usually study for my exams and complete my assignments in the library."

例: I usually study for my exams and complete my assignments in the library.

提案: حاول تصحح الأخطاء النحوية مثل استخدام الجمع مع النكرة، وقل "there were no libraries" بدلاً من "there was no libraries". مثلاً، قل "No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because there were no libraries at my school."

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because there were no libraries at my school.

提案: حاول تكون أكثر دقة في التعبير وتجنب التكرار، وانهِ الجملة بشكل واضح. مثلاً، قل "Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because many of my friends from China spend a lot of time there."

例: Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because many of my friends from China spend a lot of time there.

× It was the best place for me to focus on my studying and preparing for the exams and getting done my homeworks and my assignments.

✓ It was the best place for me to focus on my studying and preparing for the exams and getting done my homework and my assignments.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'homework' instead of 'homeworks'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× The environment was just quiet and peaceful, and I really enjoyed.

✓ The environment was just quiet and peaceful, and I really enjoyed it.

The verb 'enjoy' requires an object to complete its meaning. The sentence lacks an object after 'enjoyed'. Adding 'it' clarifies what was enjoyed. This is an incorrect use of prepositions or sentence structure issue.

× I usually study for my final exams and my midterm exams and also umm completing my assignments and homeworks.

✓ I usually study for my final exams and my midterm exams and also complete my assignments and homework.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. Also, 'completing' should be 'complete' to maintain parallel structure with 'study'. This is a singular and plural issue and verb form issue.

× No, unfortunately I didn't have the chance to go to the library when I was a kid because there was no libraries available in in my school.

✓ No, unfortunately I didn't have the chance to go to the library when I was a kid because there were no libraries available in my school.

The phrase 'there was no libraries' is incorrect because 'libraries' is plural and requires the plural verb 'were' instead of 'was'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I believe yes, since I have multiple friends from China and I know that they spend most of their time in the library. I think they they love their.

✓ I believe yes, since I have multiple friends from China and I know that they spend most of their time in the library. I think they love it.

The phrase 'they love their' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Their' is a possessive pronoun and needs a noun to follow. The correct pronoun here is 'it' referring to the library. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and singular/plural issue.