Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's help me' và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như 'use always use'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, mainly to write new books or study. I enjoy exploring different topics there because it helps me learn new things and improve my knowledge. Additionally, I use the library as a quiet place to focus on my work.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to writing' và câu không hoàn chỉnh như 'I use.' Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: In the library, I usually write new books and explore new topics. Sometimes, I go there to focus on my work quietly, and occasionally, I talk with my friends.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh ý. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và logic hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because it was far from my house, and I didn't have a car or enough time. However, I have always appreciated libraries because they help me learn.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh nói lắp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Actually, I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides knowledge and new information. Also, I believe their parents encourage them to read more.

× I enjoy following different topics there because it's help me learn new things and improve my knowledge.

✓ I enjoy following different topics there because it helps me learn new things and improve my knowledge.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular present tense 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Sometimes I use always use the library as a quiet place to focus on my work.

✓ I always use the library as a quiet place to focus on my work.

The adverb 'always' is incorrectly placed after 'use'. It should be placed before the main verb to correctly modify it.

× I usually do in the library to writing new book and explore new things.

✓ I usually write new books and explore new things in the library.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Do to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'write'. Also, 'new book' should be plural 'new books' to match the context.

× I use. Sometime I go to the library to focus on my work and I talk to my people.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library to focus on my work and talk to people.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary words. 'I use.' is incomplete and should be removed. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'I talk to my people' is vague; 'talk to people' is clearer.

× No, I don't, because when I was kid I don't have a car and the library very far from my house and I don't have time to the library and I don't have money to the library.

✓ No, I didn't, because when I was a kid I didn't have a car and the library was very far from my house and I didn't have time or money to go to the library.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the context is past, 'don't' should be 'didn't', and 'library very far' needs the verb 'was'. Also, 'to the library' needs the verb 'go'.

× But I'm very kind to the library because it's helped me in.

✓ But I'm very fond of the library because it has helped me.

'Kind to the library' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fond of the library'. Also, 'it's helped me in' is incomplete; 'it has helped me' is correct.

× Actually, I don't know, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because the library bring knowledge for the kids and for the new thing.

✓ Actually, I don't know, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because the library brings knowledge to the kids and new things.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'library'. Also, 'for the new thing' is incorrect; it should be 'new things'. The preposition 'for' should be 'to'.

× And I think my your parents very.

✓ And I think your parents do so very much.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'do so very much' completes the thought and makes it grammatically correct.