Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Please provide a clear and direct answer, such as 'No, I don't often go to the library because I am busy.' Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually study at home.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Please say 'I usually read novels in my free time.' You can add more details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I usually read novels in my free time because it helps me relax and improve my English.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks a clear topic sentence. Please say 'Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading books there.' Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading books and learning new things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. 'Shiny KISS' seems incorrect or irrelevant. Please answer directly, for example, 'Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to read and study.'

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to read books and do their homework.

× No, I have the time.

✓ No, I don't have the time.

The sentence is a response to a question about frequency, implying lack of time. The modal verb 'do' is needed to form the negative present tense. Without 'do', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Use 'don't have' to express not having time.

× I go to read novel in the free time.

✓ I go to read novels in my free time.

The noun 'novel' should be plural 'novels' because it refers to reading books in general. Also, 'the free time' is incorrect; it should be 'my free time' to indicate personal free time. Plural nouns and possessive pronouns are needed here.

× It was one of my favorite place because I love library.

✓ It was one of my favorite places because I love the library.

'Place' should be plural 'places' because it is part of 'one of my favorite places'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the place. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× Yes, Shiny KISS often go to the library to read and study.

✓ Yes, Shiny KISS often goes to the library to read and study.

The subject 'Shiny KISS' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' to agree in number. Using 'go' is incorrect subject-verb agreement.