Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler var. Daha doğal ve akıcı olmak için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz kelimeleri çıkarın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızda bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because my university is very challenging. The library is a quiet place where I can concentrate and study effectively.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar mevcut. Cümlelerinizi daha net ve doğru yapıda kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı bağlaçlarla destekleyerek daha tutarlı hale getirin.

例: I usually study for my exams in the library because my school has many tests. I want to pass my courses easily, so I spend a lot of time preparing there.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman uyumsuzluğu ve tekrarlar var. Geçmiş zaman kullanırken dikkatli olun ve cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my classes were not difficult.

提案: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha kesin ve doğru ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha tutarlı yapabilirsiniz.

例: I'm not sure, but I have seen on social media that Chinese kids study very hard. Therefore, I think they often go to the library to study.

× I always go to library because library umm really library I really silence places so I am I can focus easily.

✓ I always go to the library because the library is really a silent place, so I can focus easily.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'silent places' should be singular 'a silent place' to match the context.

× my school have a lot of My school gives a lot of exams.

✓ My school has a lot of exams.

The subject 'my school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× So I I must study my exams because I want to pass my university easily.

✓ So I must study for my exams because I want to pass my university easily.

The verb 'study' is usually followed by 'for' when referring to preparing for exams. Also, 'study my exams' is incorrect; it should be 'study for my exams'.

× My classes was not hard, were not hard.

✓ My classes were not hard.

The subject 'classes' is plural, so the past tense verb should be 'were' instead of 'was'.

× I didn't go to library.

✓ I didn't go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× I saw on the social media a Chinese kids really study harder.

✓ I saw on social media that Chinese kids really study harder.

'A Chinese kids' is incorrect because 'kids' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'on the social media' should be 'on social media'. The sentence structure is corrected by adding 'that' to introduce the clause.

× So I think Chinese kids often go to library.

✓ So I think Chinese kids often go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.