Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Try to answer directly whether you often go to the library or not, and add a reason or detail using linking words. For example, start with a clear statement and then explain.

例: Yes, I often go to the library, especially with my friends, because we enjoy studying together in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat relevant but 'argue with friends' is unusual in a library context and may confuse the listener. Try to use more appropriate vocabulary and add linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: In the library, I usually read books and discuss ideas with my friends quietly, which helps us understand the material better.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I loved reading books and often visited the library to find new stories.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words.

例: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in my opinion, many of them enjoy reading books at home or school.

× Here I want to go to the library with my friends.

✓ I want to go to the library with my friends now.

The original sentence uses 'Here' incorrectly. It should be replaced with 'now' or omitted to express the current desire. Also, 'want to go' is correct, but 'Here' is misplaced, causing confusion.

× In the library I actually read books and argue with friends.

✓ In the library, I actually read books and argue with my friends.

The phrase 'argue with friends' is grammatically correct, but adding 'my' clarifies possession and is more natural in this context.

× Yeah, actually when I was a kid I loved reading book and visit library.

✓ Yeah, actually when I was a kid I loved reading books and visiting the library.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books. 'Visit' should be in the gerund form 'visiting' to match 'reading' and maintain parallel structure. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article.

× I don't know Chinese kids to go to library but in my opinion Chinese kids are reading book I don't know.

✓ I don't know if Chinese kids go to the library, but in my opinion, Chinese kids are reading books, I don't know.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition use and sentence structure. 'To go to library' should be 'if Chinese kids go to the library'. Also, 'reading book' should be 'reading books'. Adding commas improves clarity.