Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutarak, neden kütüphaneye sık gitmediğinizi açıkça belirtin.

例: I don't often go to the library because I find it hard to concentrate with many people around. I usually prefer quieter places to study.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam karışıklığı var. Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için, ne yaptığınızı ve neden yaptığınızı net bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

例: When I go to the library, I usually study by watching educational videos because I find it hard to focus otherwise.

提案: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve neden kütüphaneye gitmediğinizi açıkça belirtin.

例: I never went to the library as a child because it wasn't popular in my hometown.

提案: Cevabınız dürüst ve net ancak daha doğal bir ifade için cümle yapınızı biraz daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaç kullanarak cümlenizi daha tutarlı yapabilirsiniz.

例: Honestly, I don't know much about Chinese culture, so I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library or not.

× I usually don't go to library often because when I go to library I don't.

✓ I usually don't go to the library often because when I go to the library I don't.

In English, 'library' as a specific place requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I cannot focus on my work because there are a lot of people working there and I just watching them.

✓ I cannot focus on my work because there are a lot of people working there and I am just watching them.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'watching' to form the present continuous tense. This is necessary to express an ongoing action.

× So I don't like to go libraries.

✓ So I don't like to go to libraries.

The verb 'go' when followed by a place requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'libraries' is plural, so 'to' is needed before it to indicate direction or destination.

× I generally studies my work because when I go to the library I cannot focus on my work, so I need to watch something and I I shouldn't watch outside.

✓ I generally study my work because when I go to the library I cannot focus on my work, so I need to watch something and I shouldn't watch outside.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb 'study' without 's'. 'Studies' is the third person singular form and is incorrect here.

× I never went to library when I was a kid because it wasn't very popular in my hometown.

✓ I never went to the library when I was a kid because it wasn't very popular in my hometown.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.