Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如冠词使用错误（"go to library"应为"go to the library"），并且回答可以更自然简洁。

例: I don't go to the library very often now, but I used to visit it frequently when I was at university.

提案: 回答中应注意冠词使用（"go to library"应为"go to the library"），并且避免重复表达。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually go to the library to borrow books that interest me, and I also used to finish my homework there.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加一些细节使内容更丰富。

例: No, I seldom went to the library when I was a kid because there weren't many libraries near my home.

提案: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性，如"there's not so many libraries"应为"there aren't many libraries"。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In big cities, many Chinese kids often visit the library, but in rural areas and small towns, they don't go as much because there aren't many libraries available.

× Well, now I don't go to library that often, but when I was in the university I often went to the library.

✓ Well, now I don't go to the library that often, but when I was at university I often went to the library.

“library”前面缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的图书馆。"in the university"应改为"at university"，因为通常说“在大学”用介词“at”。

× I usually go to the library to borrow some books that I'm interested in and I used to go to library to finish my homework.

✓ I usually go to the library to borrow some books that I'm interested in and I used to go to the library to finish my homework.

“go to library”缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的图书馆。

× While in big cities I have seen many kids go to the library very often, but maybe in rural areas and small towns kids don't go to libraries that much because there's not so many libraries.

✓ While in big cities I have seen many kids go to the library very often, but maybe in rural areas and small towns kids don't go to libraries that much because there aren't so many libraries.

“there's not so many libraries”中“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”，即“there aren't”。