Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。簡潔で明確な文を作り、理由を述べる際は論理的に繋げる表現を使いましょう。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books there in a quiet environment.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、文法の誤りと繋ぎ言葉の使い方が改善できます。より自然な表現と接続詞を使いましょう。

例: I usually read books and study in the library because it is a very quiet place, so I can concentrate better.

提案: 短い文が断片的で繋がりが弱いです。理由や感想を一文でまとめ、具体的な内容を加えましょう。

例: Yes, I went to the library as a child because it had a wide variety of books for children, which I really enjoyed reading.

提案: 答えが曖昧で論理的な展開が不足しています。自分の意見をはっきり述べ、理由を添えて話しましょう。

例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese children often go to the library because it is a good place for studying and reading.

× Why is that I reading books is. I can.

✓ I like reading books because I can.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. It should be combined into a coherent sentence expressing the reason for liking reading books.

× I usually do reading books and study in the library because library is very quiet space so I can study.

✓ I usually read books and study in the library because the library is a very quiet space, so I can study.

The phrase 'do reading books' is incorrect; 'read books' is the correct verb phrase. Also, 'library is very quiet space' lacks articles and needs 'the' and 'a' for proper grammar.

× Because the library has. Many variety books for children.

✓ Because the library has many varieties of books for children.

The sentence is fragmented and 'many variety books' is incorrect; it should be 'many varieties of books'. Also, the period after 'has' is incorrect.

× I like reading this.

✓ I like reading them.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect when referring to multiple books; 'them' is the correct pronoun for plural objects.

× I'm, I don't know, I have no idea, but a foreign country kids can use the library.

✓ I don't know, I have no idea, but kids in foreign countries can use the library.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary repetition. 'A foreign country kids' is incorrect; it should be 'kids in foreign countries'.