Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail about your library visits.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it easier to concentrate there than at home. For example, the quiet environment helps me focus better on my reading.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer directly and complete your thoughts. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain your activities clearly.

例: Usually, I browse the shelves to find books that interest me because I don't plan in advance. Sometimes, I also use the library to study recipes since I enjoy cooking.

提案: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I wasn't interested in reading or studying at that time. However, I have developed an interest in books since then.

提案: Try to answer more confidently and directly. Use linking words to explain your uncertainty and curiosity clearly. Avoid awkward phrasing and improve sentence flow.

例: I'm not sure how often Chinese kids go to the library because I don't have many Chinese friends to ask. However, I am curious about their reading habits and would like to learn more.

× I I can concentrate concentrate on reading at library rather than at at home.

✓ I can concentrate on reading at the library rather than at home.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, repeated words 'I' and 'concentrate' are errors but not related to the grammar problem types listed.

× So I try to use more library.

✓ So I try to use the library more.

The phrase 'use more library' is incorrect because 'library' is a countable noun and needs an article. The correct phrase is 'use the library more' to indicate increased frequency.

× I usually search for the books what I want to read.

✓ I usually search for the books that I want to read.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrect here; 'that' or 'which' should be used to refer to 'books'. 'What' is used differently in English.

× I don't decide prior coming to the library or sometimes I am a chef so I.

✓ I don't decide before coming to the library, or sometimes I am a chef, so I...

The preposition 'prior' is incorrect in this context; 'before' is the correct preposition to use before a gerund. Also, the sentence is incomplete but correction focuses on the preposition issue.

× To be honest I didn't because when I was a kid I used, I didn't like to read books even like studying as well.

✓ To be honest, I didn't because when I was a kid, I didn't like to read books or even study as well.

The phrase 'used, I didn't like' is incorrect and confusing. The correct form is 'I didn't like' to express past negative preference. Also, 'like studying' should be 'like to study' or 'like studying'; here 'or even study' fits better.

× I'm not sure about that because I'm not the Chinese and I don't have much Chinese friend to ask about the situation of how often do they use library, but I am also curious about that.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I'm not Chinese and I don't have many Chinese friends to ask about how often they use the library, but I am also curious about that.

'The Chinese' is incorrect when referring to nationality; 'Chinese' without 'the' is correct. 'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'many' is correct for countable 'friends'. Also, 'how often do they use library' should be 'how often they use the library' (indirect question). The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'.