Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and effective by avoiding redundancy and adding a linking phrase to enrich the response. Try to combine your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading, especially books about history and geopolitics, which help me understand the world better.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Also, clarify your ideas and keep sentences concise.

例: Usually, I read books in the library because it is quite quiet, which makes it an ideal place for studying.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to be more specific about your experiences.

例: Yes, I went to the library quite often as a child because my city is known for its many quality libraries. During the summer, I usually visited them since my parents were working.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence, and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly, use linking words, and avoid uncertain phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

例: Although I'm not Chinese, I believe many Chinese kids go to the library because they study hard. However, parental supervision might limit their time there.

× It's lively.

✓ It is lively.

The contraction 'It's' is acceptable in spoken English, but in this context, the sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'It is lively' is clearer, but the sentence still lacks context. The student likely meant to say 'The library is lively.' to provide a complete thought.

× So yeah, I often read books and also I use label is to study because it's label is quite silent.

✓ So yeah, I often read books and also I use the library to study because it is quite silent.

The phrase 'use label is' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'use the library'. Also, 'it's label is quite silent' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it is quite silent' referring to the library. Correcting these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× So this is one of the best places to study.

✓ So this is one of the best places to study.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× I'm kind of person.

✓ I'm the kind of person.

The phrase 'I'm kind of person' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'kind'. The correct phrase is 'I'm the kind of person' to specify the type of person being described.

× I can't.

✓ I can't.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear without context. However, grammatically it is correct as a short form of 'I cannot'. No correction needed.

× Yes, quite often, because my city is quite famous for having a lot of books and quality for libraries.

✓ Yes, quite often, because my city is quite famous for having a lot of books and quality libraries.

The phrase 'quality for libraries' is incorrect. It should be 'quality libraries' without the preposition 'for'. This corrects the noun phrase to properly describe the libraries.

× So during the summer I used to go to libraries so often since my parents are working.

✓ So during the summer I used to go to libraries often since my parents were working.

The phrase 'used to go' correctly indicates past habitual action. However, 'since my parents are working' mixes present tense with past context. It should be 'since my parents were working' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I'm not Chinese so I don't know, but I have a image of Chinese kids studying a lot so probably yes, but I also feel like they're always under the surveillance of their parents so maybe no.

✓ I'm not Chinese so I don't know, but I have an image of Chinese kids studying a lot so probably yes, but I also feel like they're always under the surveillance of their parents so maybe no.

The article 'a' before 'image' is incorrect because 'image' starts with a vowel sound. It should be 'an image'. This is an article usage error related to pronouns and determiners.

× I even don't know if there is a livelihood.

✓ I don't even know if there is a library.

The phrase 'there is a livelihood' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. The intended word is probably 'library'. Also, the adverb 'even' is better placed after the auxiliary verb 'do' in 'I don't even know'. This corrects the sentence structure and meaning.