Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'No, I don't often go to the library because I usually buy books online.'처럼 자연스럽고 명확한 문장을 사용하세요.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually buy books online or from bookstores.

提案: 답변이 반복적이고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 주제 문장으로 직접 답하고, 추가 설명을 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually study in my school library because it is quiet and has many resources.'

例: I usually study in my school library because it is quiet and has many resources that help me concentrate.

提案: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확히 하며 연결어를 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'No, I didn't go to the library because my hometown didn't have a good one, so I often went to bookstores with my parents.'

例: No, I didn't go to the library because my hometown didn't have a good one, so I often went to bookstores with my parents.

提案: 답변이 불확실하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 자신의 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to libraries or use online bookstores.'

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to libraries or use online bookstores to find books.

× No, because I prepare. To sell, buy the book.

✓ No, because I prepare to sell or buy books.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'To sell, buy the book' is not a complete sentence. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually do in library.

✓ I usually study in the library.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and object. 'Do' is a general verb and needs an object or complement. Replacing 'do' with 'study' and adding 'the' before 'library' corrects the sentence.

× I usually study in library in my school.

✓ I usually study in the library at my school.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'in my school' is better expressed as 'at my school' to indicate location.

× No, I didn't go off to the library because my hometown doesn't have a great library, so I usually want to bookstore with my parents.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library because my hometown doesn't have a great library, so I usually go to the bookstore with my parents.

The phrase 'go off to' is incorrect here; 'go to' is appropriate. 'Want to bookstore' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the bookstore'. Adding 'the' before 'bookstore' is necessary as it refers to a specific place.

× I'm not sure because I'm a Korean girl, umm but I think Chinese kids may often go library or online bookstore.

✓ I'm not sure because I'm a Korean girl, umm, but I think Chinese kids may often go to the library or online bookstore.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'library' and 'online bookstore'. Also, adding commas improves sentence flow.