Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and correcting grammar errors such as 'this is some useful information' to 'there is some useful information'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I used to visit the library quite frequently during my university days because it was a peaceful place to study and offered useful resources. However, these days, I don't go as often due to my busy schedule and limited free time.

提案: Your answer is good but can be enhanced by using linking words to connect your ideas and by varying vocabulary. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases like 'reading magazines' and 'borrowing books for extra reading' without clear distinction.

例: When I went to the library, I mostly focused on studying for exams and completing assignments. Additionally, I enjoyed reading magazines and occasionally borrowed books to expand my knowledge. The peaceful environment really helped me concentrate better.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, try to be more specific about the types of storybooks you liked to make your answer richer.

例: Yes, I went to the library occasionally as a child, usually with my friends from school. Although I wasn't a regular visitor, I enjoyed reading simple storybooks, especially those with colorful pictures and fairy tales.

提案: There are grammatical errors such as 'children's' instead of 'children' and unclear phrases like 'books to that supports and their schoolwork'. Try to correct these and use linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

例: Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier. Moreover, libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a wide range of books that support their schoolwork and personal interests. For example, during weekends or holidays, it is common to see many kids there.

× I found it a peaceful place to study and this is some useful information and resources.

✓ I found it a peaceful place to study and there is some useful information and resources.

The sentence incorrectly combines singular and plural forms without proper structure. 'Information' is uncountable and singular, so 'this is some useful information' is correct, but 'and resources' is plural and needs to be connected properly. Adding 'there is' clarifies the existence of both information and resources. Suggestion: use 'there is some useful information and resources' to correctly express singular and plural items.

× However, these days, umm I don't go as often because of busy schedule and limited free time.

✓ However, these days, umm I don't go as often because of a busy schedule and limited free time.

The phrase 'busy schedule' requires an article 'a' before it because 'schedule' is a countable noun. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar. Suggestion: always use appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.

× When I went to the library, I mostly focused on studying for exams and completing assignments.

✓ When I went to the library, I mostly focused on studying for exams and on completing assignments.

The verb 'focused' is usually followed by the preposition 'on' before each object for clarity. Omitting the second 'on' can cause ambiguity. Suggestion: repeat 'on' before each object when listing multiple objects after 'focused'.

× Yes, many Chinese children's frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

✓ Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

The word 'children's' is possessive singular/plural, but here the plural noun 'children' is needed without the possessive apostrophe. Using 'children's' is incorrect in this context. Suggestion: use 'children' as the plural noun without apostrophe when referring to multiple kids.

× Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and often a wide range of books to that supports and their schoolwork and personal interest.

✓ Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and often a wide range of books that support their schoolwork and personal interests.

The phrase 'books to that supports and their schoolwork and personal interest' is grammatically incorrect. 'That' should be a relative pronoun referring to 'books' and must agree in number with 'books' (plural), so 'support' is correct. Also, 'interest' should be plural 'interests' to match 'schoolwork and personal interests'. Suggestion: use 'books that support their schoolwork and personal interests' for correct agreement and clarity.