Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammatical errors, such as missing articles and repeated words.

例: I don't usually go to the library because I prefer buying books. However, sometimes I visit it to find books that are hard to purchase elsewhere.

提案: Use linking words to connect your ideas and vary your sentence structures. Also, include articles like 'the' before 'library' for natural English usage.

例: When I go to the library, I usually look for books that are hard to find or not available for sale. Additionally, I sometimes visit just to enjoy the quiet environment.

提案: Pay attention to verb tenses and article usage. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be more concise and natural.

例: Unfortunately, the library in my hometown was quite small and had few books. Therefore, as a kid, I rarely went there because I didn't have the habit of reading.

提案: Avoid hesitation and repeated words. Structure your answer clearly with linking words. Also, complete your sentences fully to express your ideas clearly.

例: I'm not sure if I can answer for all Chinese kids, but in my opinion, going to the library depends more on the habits instilled by parents rather than nationality or race.

× I don't usually go to library as I prefer buying books instead of going to library, but sometimes I do go there to to get some books which is difficult to buy outside.

✓ I don't usually go to the library as I prefer buying books instead of going to the library, but sometimes I do go there to get some books which are difficult to buy outside.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect. Also, 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I don't usually go to library as I prefer buying books instead of going to library, but sometimes I do go there to to get some books which is difficult to buy outside.

✓ I don't usually go to the library as I prefer buying books instead of going to the library, but sometimes I do go there to get some books which are difficult to buy outside.

The subject 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× When I go to library, I will usually look for the book which is hard to find outside or which is not available for sale.

✓ When I go to the library, I will usually look for the book which is hard to find outside or which is not available for sale.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× Sometimes I go to library just to enjoy the quiet environment there.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library just to enjoy the quiet environment there.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× As a kid, I rarely go to the library as I do not have the habit of reading at the young age.

✓ As a kid, I rarely went to the library as I did not have the habit of reading at a young age.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense: 'go' to 'went' and 'do not have' to 'did not have'. Also, 'at the young age' should be 'at a young age' for natural expression.

× As a kid, I rarely go to the library as I do not have the habit of reading at the young age.

✓ As a kid, I rarely went to the library as I did not have the habit of reading at a young age.

The phrase 'at the young age' is unnatural; 'at a young age' is the correct expression.