Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免句子不完整，"Broaden my horizon"应作为完整句子表达原因，同时可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week to read some books because it helps me broaden my horizon.

提案: 注意语法错误，如"book"应为复数"books"，"provide"应为"provides"，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually read books in the library, especially those that are not available at school, because the library provides a quiet and comfortable place which helps me concentrate on reading.

提案: 时态使用不当，"haven't got"应改为过去时态"didn't have"，并且"one of the interesting"表达不完整，应改为"one of the interesting activities"。

例: Yes, I enjoyed reading in the library when I was young because I didn't have an iPhone, so reading books was one of the interesting activities for me.

提案: 回答较为简洁，可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和自然。

例: I think so because there are at least two libraries around my house, and I often see many kids there, which shows that visiting libraries is quite common among Chinese children.

× Broaden my horizon.

✓ It broadens my horizon.

原句缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构错误。应补充完整句子，表达清楚意思。

× especially the book that are not available at school.

✓ especially the books that are not available at school.

主语是复数形式books，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，保持主谓一致。

× The library always provide me a quiet and comfortable place which help me to concentrate on the reading.

✓ The library always provides me a quiet and comfortable place which helps me to concentrate on the reading.

主语the library是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式provides和helps，保持主谓一致。

× I haven't got the iPhone so reading the book is one of the interesting for me.

✓ I didn't have an iPhone, so reading books was one of the interesting things for me.

描述过去情况时，动词应使用过去时态。'haven't got'应改为'didn't have'，'is'改为'was'。

× reading the book is one of the interesting for me.

✓ reading books is one of the interesting things for me.

'book'应为复数形式'books'，'interesting'后应加名词'things'，使表达完整。