Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但句子较长且部分表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复信息，并使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I seldom go to the library because it is far from my home. It takes me about an hour to get there by subway. Therefore, I prefer studying at home since it is quiet and convenient.

提案: 回答内容较简单，缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更多关于喜欢的小说类型或阅读习惯的细节。

例: If I go to the library, I usually look for interesting novels, such as detective or historical ones. After that, I find a comfortable seat to enjoy reading quietly.

提案: 回答较好，表达了原因和条件，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子并注意语法准确性。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I enjoyed outdoor activities like camping and hiking. However, if the weather was bad, I would stay at home.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议补充完整句子，使用连接词，并提供更多具体信息。

例: No, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library. Most of them stay at school to study hard because they have a heavy workload.

× I'm an outdoors person liking to go outside in nature such as camping and hiking.

✓ I'm an outdoors person who likes to go outside in nature such as camping and hiking.

这里需要使用动词的第三人称单数形式“likes”，而不是动名词“liking”，因为主语是单数第三人称。

× Most of Chinese children will stay at school to study very hard because we have a heavy workload on on the.

✓ Most Chinese children stay at school to study very hard because we have a heavy workload.

“Most of Chinese children”应改为“Most Chinese children”，去掉“of”更自然；“workload on on the”是重复且不完整，应删去多余部分。