Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“make friends with more others”不符合英语习惯，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy meeting new people there. Besides, I usually spend time learning about new technologies.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“English knowledge, knowledge”重复且不准确。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明你读的书籍类型。

例: Usually, I read books about history and economics in the library. I also practice my English skills there, which makes me very happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“didn't know what the library exceeded”不符合英语表达习惯。建议用简单明了的句子表达过去和现在的对比。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I didn't understand its importance. But now, I know how useful it is.

提案: 句子结构错误，表达不清晰，如“parents aren't bring library to there”不符合语法。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，清楚说明原因。

例: I think most Chinese children don't often go to the library because their parents don't usually take them there.

× I can make friends with more others.

✓ I can make friends with more people.

这里的'more others'用法不正确，'others'本身表示复数，前面不需要加'more'，应使用'more people'表示更多的人。

× I often Start learning technology.

✓ I often start learning technology.

动词'start'应小写，且'learning'作为动名词形式使用正确。

× I usually start to learn about English knowledge, knowledge and reading some books.

✓ I usually start to learn about English knowledge and read some books.

'start to learn'后面不应再用'and reading'，应改为'and read'，保持动词形式一致。

× I I read some history books and economic books and so on.

✓ I read some history books, economics books, and so on.

'economic books'应改为'economics books'，因为'economics'是学科名词，且句中重复'I'应删除多余的一个。

× I didn't know what the library exceeded.

✓ I didn't know what the library was.

'exceeded'用法错误，句意应为'我不知道图书馆是什么'，应使用'was'表示过去状态。

× But at now I know what the library exceeds.

✓ But now I know what the library is.

'at now'应改为'now'，'exceeds'用法错误，应为'library is'表示现在的状态。

× because their parents aren't bring library to there.

✓ because their parents don't bring them to the library.

'aren't bring'语法错误，应为'don't bring'，'library to there'表达不正确，应为'them to the library'。