Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'to reading book' nên là 'to read books'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library to read books because it helps me enhance my knowledge. Moreover, it makes me feel relaxed and improves my ability to concentrate.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I'm reading book' nên là 'I usually read books'. Ngoài ra, danh từ số nhiều và danh từ đếm được cần được sử dụng đúng, ví dụ 'novels', 'scientific books', và 'his poems' có thể gây nhầm lẫn. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

例: I usually read books in the library. The types of books I enjoy are novels, scientific books, and sometimes poetry.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'in my area don't have' nên là 'there wasn't any library in my area'. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't any library in my area, so it was difficult for me to find one.

提案: Bạn nên tránh nói những điều không chắc chắn hoặc không liên quan đến câu hỏi. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tập trung vào câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'they are usually go' nên là 'they usually go'.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them usually go to the library because they are hardworking.

× Yes, I usually go to the library to reading book.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library to read books.

The verb 'to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'book' should be plural as it refers to books in general.

× Yes, I usually go to the library to reading book.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library to read books.

When talking about books in general, the plural form 'books' is appropriate instead of the singular 'book'.

× Besides, it makes me feel relaxed and improve my ability to concentrate.

✓ Besides, it makes me feel relaxed and improves my ability to concentrate.

The conjunction 'and' connects two verbs that share the same subject, so both verbs should be in the same form. 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'improves'.

× I'm reading book in the library.

✓ I read books in the library.

The present continuous 'I'm reading' is not appropriate here for habitual action; simple present 'I read' is correct. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books'.

× The type of book I usually reading is novel, scientific book or sometimes his poems.

✓ The types of books I usually read are novels, scientific books, or sometimes his poems.

After 'usually', the base form of the verb 'read' should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' to match the plural list, and 'book' should be plural 'books'.

× The type of book I usually reading is novel, scientific book or sometimes his poems.

✓ The types of books I usually read are novels, scientific books, or sometimes his poems.

When listing multiple items, the noun should be plural to match the list.

× The type of book I usually reading is novel, scientific book or sometimes his poems.

✓ The types of books I usually read are novels, scientific books, or sometimes his poems.

The pronoun 'his' is unclear here; if referring to a specific poet, it should be clarified. Otherwise, it may be better to say 'poems' without 'his'.

× No, because in my area don't have any library when I was a kid, so it's difficult for me to find a library.

✓ No, because there wasn't any library in my area when I was a kid, so it was difficult for me to find a library.

The sentence lacks the correct 'there is/was' structure to indicate existence. Also, verb tense should be past to match 'when I was a kid'.

× No, because in my area don't have any library when I was a kid, so it's difficult for me to find a library.

✓ No, because there wasn't any library in my area when I was a kid, so it was difficult for me to find a library.

The verb tense should be past to match the time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× I'm a Vietnamese person so I don't know Chinese kids often go to the library or not, but I think they are usually go to the library because they are very hardworking and kind.

✓ I'm a Vietnamese person, so I don't know whether Chinese kids often go to the library or not, but I think they usually go to the library because they are very hardworking and kind.

The phrase 'I don't know Chinese kids often go' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't know whether Chinese kids often go'. Also, 'they are usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'they usually go'.