Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้นและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น การใช้ 'such as' อย่างถูกต้อง และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'type of book' ควรเป็น 'types of books'

例: Yes, I often go to the library near my house because it has many types of books, such as fiction and nonfiction. My favorite genre is nonfiction because I enjoy learning new facts.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้โครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น 'so' และ 'after' รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

例: I usually go to the library after school to review my lessons and complete my homework. After finishing my tests, I like to relax by reading nonfiction books.

提案: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรแก้ไขประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น 'because' และ 'and' รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I joined a community book club because I loved reading. I enjoyed the atmosphere of my local library very much.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงความชัดเจนของประโยคและหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน รวมถึงใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้ความหมายสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหล

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library after school to review their homework instead of playing outside because they want to improve their studies.

× Yes, I often go to library near my house.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library near my house.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' is required.

× There are plenty of type of book inside of the library such as fan nonfiction, fiction, and my favorite type of books are nonfiction.

✓ There are plenty of types of books inside the library such as fan nonfiction, fiction, and my favorite type of books is nonfiction.

The phrase 'plenty of type of book' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'plenty of', and 'book' should be plural 'books'. Also, 'my favorite type of books are' should be 'my favorite type of books is' because 'type' is singular and requires a singular verb.

× I usually go to library after school, so most of the time I will use to review the lessons and do my homework or assignment at school.

✓ I usually go to the library after school, so most of the time I use it to review the lessons and do my homework or assignments at school.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'will use to review' is incorrect; it should be 'use it to review'. Additionally, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match 'homework'.

× After I finish the test, I will find some relaxed books such as nonfiction to read.

✓ After I finish the test, I will find some relaxing books such as nonfiction to read.

The adjective 'relaxed' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'relaxing' to describe books that help one relax.

× When I was a kid, I was up.

✓ When I was a kid, I was active.

The phrase 'I was up' is unclear and incorrect in this context. It should be replaced with a clearer expression such as 'I was active' to convey the intended meaning.

× I resigned to the book club because I loved to read the book and I was like the atmosphere of my local library.

✓ I resigned from the book club because I loved to read books and I liked the atmosphere of my local library.

The verb 'resigned' should be followed by the preposition 'from', not 'to'. Also, 'loved to read the book' should be 'loved to read books' for general meaning. 'I was like the atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'I liked the atmosphere'.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to review their work or homework at the library because after school they they view they're willing to go to the library instead of playing.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to review their work or homework because after school they are willing to go to the library instead of playing.

The sentence contains repeated words 'they they' and incorrect use of 'view they're'. It should be 'they are willing'. Also, 'at the library' is redundant after 'go to the library'.

× To to read.

✓ To read.

The phrase 'To to read' contains a repeated word 'to'. It should be corrected to 'To read'.