Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'library', you can use synonyms or pronouns, and add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually visit the library twice a week since it offers a comfortable and quiet environment. This atmosphere really helps me concentrate on my studies without any distractions.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammar mistakes. Try to be more specific and use clearer expressions. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'know more about the road' which may confuse the listener.

例: I usually read and study in the library to prepare for my DSD examination. Additionally, reading helps me improve my reading skills and develop critical thinking, which broadens my knowledge.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Also, use past tense consistently when talking about the past and avoid vague expressions like 'I met'.

例: Yes, I have been going to the library since I was seven years old. When I was young, I loved reading fiction books, especially stories about princesses and princes.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar errors and repetition. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating words. Also, consider giving a balanced opinion or explaining more about the cultural context.

例: Not many Chinese children often go to the library because some parents believe that reading is less beneficial compared to studying. They think focusing on studying is the best way to improve their children's knowledge and understanding.

× Absolutely. I met. I have maintained a habit when I was seven years old.

✓ Absolutely. I have maintained a habit since I was seven years old.

The original sentence 'I met.' is incomplete and unclear, causing a sentence structure error. Also, 'I have maintained a habit when I was seven years old' is incorrect because 'when I was seven years old' refers to a past time point, so 'since' should be used with the present perfect tense to indicate the habit started in the past and continues now. The corrected sentence uses 'since' to properly link the time and the present perfect tense.

× I also think that reading helps me to improve my reading skill and critical thinking.

✓ I also think that reading helps me to improve my reading skills and critical thinking.

The word 'skill' should be pluralized to 'skills' because 'reading skills' refers to multiple abilities related to reading. This is a common quantifier error where a countable noun is incorrectly used in singular form when plural is needed.

× It helps me to know more about the road and enhance my knowledge.

✓ It helps me to know more about the world and enhance my knowledge.

The phrase 'know more about the road' is incorrect because 'road' is not the intended meaning. Likely, the student meant 'world' or 'broader topics'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and vocabulary. Correcting 'road' to 'world' makes the sentence meaningful and appropriate.

× They think that studying is the most useful methods to enhance the knowledge knowledge and broaden the understanding of their child.

✓ They think that studying is the most useful method to enhance knowledge and broaden their child's understanding.

There are multiple errors: 'methods' should be singular 'method' to agree with 'is'; 'the knowledge knowledge' is a repetition and should be 'knowledge'; 'the understanding of their child' is better expressed as 'their child's understanding' for natural possessive pronoun use. These corrections fix pronoun and noun usage errors.