Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using more natural phrasing. For example, instead of repeating 'library' and 'study' multiple times, you can use synonyms or restructure sentences. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually visit the library twice a week because I find it a quiet and comfortable place that helps me concentrate better on my studies.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words unnecessarily, complete your sentences, and use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, be specific about the types of books you read and why.

例: In the library, I usually study and read reference books related to my exams because the quiet atmosphere helps me focus without distractions.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences concise and avoid repeating phrases like 'I think'. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points.

例: Yes, I used to visit the library after tutorial classes because it gave me a chance to share my favorite books and communicate with my friends.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Avoid abrupt endings and provide a full explanation. Use linking words to connect your ideas and express your opinion clearly. Also, be careful with absolute statements; consider using softer expressions.

例: Not many Chinese kids go to the library often because many parents prefer their children to focus solely on their studies, believing that reading for leisure might distract them from academic work.

× I think that the library built a quiet and comfortable environment for me to study and it helps me to pay attention on my studying as well.

✓ I think that the library has built a quiet and comfortable environment for me to study and it helps me to pay attention to my studying as well.

The phrase 'pay attention on' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'pay attention' is 'to'. Also, 'library built' should be 'library has built' to indicate the present perfect tense, showing the environment is currently built and maintained.

× I usually read, study and read in the library because I think they're comfortable atmosphere help me to pay attention without any distraction and I like to read the books about the examination which is the reference book and I also.

✓ I usually read and study in the library because I think its comfortable atmosphere helps me to pay attention without any distractions, and I like to read books about the examination, which are reference books.

The pronoun 'they're' is incorrect for singular 'atmosphere'; it should be 'its'. 'Atmosphere' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. 'Distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match the context. 'The books' should be 'books' as a general plural noun, and 'which is the reference book' should be 'which are reference books' to agree in number.

× Yes, I went to the library after the tutorial class because I have different kinds of extracurricular activities at tutorial class when I was a kid and I think going to the library, I think that going to the library provide a chance for me to communicate and share my favorite book with my friends.

✓ Yes, I went to the library after the tutorial class because I had different kinds of extracurricular activities at tutorial class when I was a kid, and I think going to the library provided a chance for me to communicate and share my favorite books with my friends.

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Provide' should be 'provided' to agree with past tense narration. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'favorite' implying more than one.

× Absolutely no, because many parents want the kids to concentrate on their studies without any distractions. They don't think that reading can help the kids to improve their reading skills or critical thinking. So it.

✓ Absolutely not, because many parents want the kids to concentrate on their studies without any distractions. They don't think that reading can help the kids improve their reading skills or critical thinking.

The phrase 'Absolutely no' is incorrect; it should be 'Absolutely not' as a negative response. Also, 'help the kids to improve' is better as 'help the kids improve' since 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. The last sentence 'So it.' is incomplete and should be omitted.