Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ lý do bạn đến thư viện và hoạt động bạn làm ở đó một cách mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I often go to the library every day because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my homework and learn new things during my free time.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually study and do my homework in the library because it is quiet and helps me concentrate better.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và câu phụ hợp lý, tránh lỗi chia động từ và dùng từ không chính xác.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child. Instead, I stayed at home and read children's books that my mom bought for me because my parents were very busy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không tập trung vào câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và chi tiết liên quan, tránh lạc đề và lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Vietnam, many parents encourage their kids to read books before going to sleep.

× I often go to library in every day.

✓ I often go to the library every day.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in every day' is incorrect; 'every day' is the correct phrase to indicate frequency.

× Because I go in library I can do my homework, my deadline or learning something new.

✓ Because I go to the library, I can do my homework, meet my deadlines, or learn something new.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Because' clauses should be followed by a comma. Also, 'go in library' should be 'go to the library'. 'My deadline' should be plural 'my deadlines' or rephrased. 'Learning' should be 'learn' to maintain parallel verb forms.

× And I go to library every time I have free time.

✓ And I go to the library every time I have free time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× it's very quiet and suitable for students to studying, doing homework, meet deadline and so on.

✓ it's very quiet and suitable for students to study, do homework, meet deadlines, and so on.

After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'meet deadline' should be pluralized to 'meet deadlines' for correctness.

× I usually visit the library but I have free time.

✓ I usually visit the library when I have free time.

The sentence lacks a conjunction or proper structure to connect the two ideas. 'But' is incorrect here; 'when' correctly links the frequency of visiting with having free time.

× my parents was very busy and didn't have time to take me to the library.

✓ my parents were very busy and didn't have time to take me to the library.

The subject 'parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× But I really love the book which my mom bought from.

✓ But I really love the books that my mom bought for me.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Bought from' is incorrect; 'bought for me' is correct. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match context.

× the parents often take their kids to Medical Center where they can play and enjoy various active activities and also many families usually reading books before sleep.

✓ the parents often take their kids to the Medical Center where they can play and enjoy various activities, and also many families usually read books before sleep.

'Medical Center' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Active activities' is redundant; 'activities' suffices. 'Reading' should be 'read' to match tense. 'Before sleep' is better as 'before sleeping' or 'before going to sleep' but kept as is for minimal correction.