Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh lặp từ "library" quá nhiều và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "buying the new book" thành "buying new books" để câu trả lời mượt mà hơn.

例: Yes, I often visit the library because I love reading. I usually borrow books instead of buying new ones, which helps me save money.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "reading" nên là "read" và "quiet play" không phù hợp, nên dùng "quiet place". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Usually, I go to the library to find my favorite books and read there. I enjoy the quiet atmosphere because it helps me concentrate better.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "I were" nên là "I was" và "go to library" nên là "went to the library". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và dùng thì quá khứ cho phù hợp với câu hỏi.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my parents when I was a kid. I loved reading cartoon books that were available there.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "library have" nên là "libraries are". Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý tưởng.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to libraries because there are many libraries available throughout China.

× I usually go to the library, find my favorite book and reading in there.

✓ I usually go to the library, find my favorite book and read there.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'and' where the base form 'read' should be used to maintain parallel structure with the previous verbs 'go' and 'find'.

× I love in environment in the library because that's a quiet play and quiet environment.

✓ I love the environment in the library because it's a quiet place and quiet environment.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly placed before 'environment'. Also, 'play' is a wrong word here; it should be 'place'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'environment' to specify it.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I were a kid with my parents.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my parents.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'.

× I often go to library because they have a cartoon book for the children and at that time I really love them.

✓ I often go to the library because they have cartoon books for children and at that time I really loved them.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'A cartoon book' should be plural 'cartoon books' to match 'they'. Also, 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match 'at that time'.

× Yes, and the Chinese kids often go to the library because. I think library have everywhere in Chinese.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because I think libraries are everywhere in China.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Because.' should be connected to the following sentence. 'Library have' is incorrect; it should be 'libraries are'. Also, 'Chinese' should be 'China' when referring to the country.