Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về tần suất đến thư viện và lý do một cách ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

例: I don't often go to the library because it's not very popular among young people in Vietnam. Instead, I usually spend my free time with friends or playing sports.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như dùng đúng thì và dạng từ (borrowed -> borrow). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "Let me think" và hoàn thiện câu ví dụ cuối cùng. Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually go to the library to borrow and read books related to my courses. Moreover, I spend several hours studying there because the quiet atmosphere helps me focus and complete my assignments. For example, I often prepare for exams in the library.

提案: Câu trả lời có mâu thuẫn và lỗi ngữ pháp (It make -> It made). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh mâu thuẫn trong ý tưởng và dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng hơn về thói quen khi còn nhỏ.

例: When I was a kid, I rarely went to the library because I was very energetic and preferred playing sports like badminton and swimming. I found these activities more enjoyable than sitting quietly to read.

提案: Bạn đã nhầm lẫn về chủ đề (nói về trẻ em Việt Nam thay vì Trung Quốc) và có lỗi ngữ pháp (breeding habit không phù hợp, small parents không đúng). Hãy trả lời đúng câu hỏi, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library more regularly than Vietnamese children because reading habits are encouraged from an early age in China. However, in Vietnam, this is gradually improving as parents and schools promote library visits.

× I prefer hanging out with friends or playing sport rather than free books.

✓ I prefer hanging out with friends or playing sports rather than reading books.

The phrase 'playing sport' is incorrect; it should be 'playing sports' to indicate the activity. Also, 'free books' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'reading books'. The preposition 'rather than' should be followed by a parallel structure, so 'playing sports rather than reading books' is correct.

× I usually go to the libraries to borrowed and read books, especially those related to my courses.

✓ I usually go to the library to borrow and read books, especially those related to my courses.

The verb 'borrowed' is incorrectly used in past tense after 'to'; after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so it should be 'to borrow'. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match the usual expression.

× Seeing the atmosphere is perfect for focusing on my work and completing my assignments.

✓ I find the atmosphere perfect for focusing on my work and completing my assignments.

The original sentence starts with 'Seeing' which is incorrect here; it creates a sentence fragment. The correct structure is to use a subject and verb, e.g., 'I find the atmosphere perfect...'. This corrects the sentence structure error.

× Instead, I prefer hanging out with friends or playing various kind of sports like badminton or swimming.

✓ Instead, I prefer hanging out with friends or playing various kinds of sports like badminton or swimming.

The phrase 'various kind of sports' is incorrect; 'various' should be followed by the plural noun 'kinds' to agree in number. This is a present tense issue related to quantifier and noun agreement.

× It make me feel more lively and happy.

✓ It makes me feel more lively and happy.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× That is the reason why I hardly go to the library when I was young.

✓ That is the reason why I hardly went to the library when I was young.

The phrase 'when I was young' refers to the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'. This is a past tense issue.

× Well, I must say that in Vietnam many children do not often go to the library because they haven't developed a strong breeding habit from an early age.

✓ Well, I must say that in Vietnam many children do not often go to the library because they haven't developed a strong reading habit from an early age.

The word 'breeding' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'reading'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers or vocabulary error.

× However, I believe these situation is improving as small parents and schools are encouraging kids to read and visit libraries regularly.

✓ However, I believe this situation is improving as small parents and schools are encouraging kids to read and visit libraries regularly.

The subject 'situation' is singular, so the determiner should be 'this' instead of 'these' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error related to pronoun and noun agreement.