Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构不够自然，且有些重复。建议使用更简洁流畅的句子，避免重复表达。

例: I don't often go to the library, but I usually visit it before exams to prepare.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习简单句子结构，直接回答问题，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: When I go to the library, it's usually to study for my exams because I find it quiet and helpful.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意词汇的正确使用。

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred studying at home and playing with my friends in my free time.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复。

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library. I have noticed that even kids as young as six or seven visit the library to study or read books.

× I still before says I seldom go to library when I go to library which means my exams are coming, so I often prepare my exams and I like ready to study and to.

✓ I still say I seldom go to the library, but when I go to the library it means my exams are coming, so I often prepare for my exams and I like to get ready to study.

句子中使用了错误的时态和表达方式，如“says”应为“say”，且缺少冠词“the”在“library”前。需要使用一般现在时表达习惯动作，并且补充介词“for”在“prepare”后。

× I often prepare my exams and I like ready to study and to.

✓ I often prepare for my exams and I like to get ready to study.

动词“prepare”后应加介词“for”表示准备某事，且“like ready to study and to”结构不完整，应改为“like to get ready to study”。

× Definitely no. That's because when I was a kid I usually I prefer to study at home and when I have some some spare wine my spare time, I spend my spare time on playing with my friends.

✓ Definitely not. That's because when I was a kid, I usually preferred to study at home, and when I had some spare time, I spent it playing with my friends.

描述过去习惯时应使用过去时态，如“prefer”改为“preferred”，“have”改为“had”，“spend”改为“spent”。另外，“some some spare wine”应为“some spare time”，修正拼写错误。

× I find more and more younger people and even the kids like 6 or 7 years old, they go to the library to study something or just for.

✓ I find more and more young people and even kids like 6 or 7 years old go to the library to study something or just for fun.

“younger people”应改为“young people”更符合表达习惯；“the kids”改为“kids”更自然；句尾不完整，补充“for fun”使句子完整。