Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и повторений, что снижает его естественность. Постарайтесь говорить более связно и избегать лишних слов, чтобы ответ был более эффективным и понятным.

例: I don't often go to the library because it's not very popular in my city. However, I sometimes visit to borrow books, although I usually prefer reading e-books.

提案: Ваш ответ короткий и немного простой. Добавьте связующие слова и более конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более полным и логичным.

例: When I go to the library, I usually borrow books that interest me. Additionally, I sometimes make copies of important documents because it's cheaper there than elsewhere.

提案: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и недостаток связности. Используйте правильные времена и связывающие слова, чтобы улучшить структуру и ясность.

例: I lived in a small town when I was a kid, and there was only one small library for the whole town. So, I visited it sometimes, but it wasn't very big.

提案: Ответ слишком общий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь давать более развёрнутые и точные ответы с использованием связующих слов.

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their education system emphasizes discipline and studying.

× I don't really often go to libraries and going to such uh, places, uh and uh, popular in my city.

✓ I don't often really go to libraries, and going to such places is popular in my city.

The adverb 'really' is misplaced. It should be placed after 'often' to correctly modify the frequency. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'is' before 'popular' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer read books, so with the e-book.

✓ I prefer reading books, so I use e-books.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'reading' instead of the base form 'read'. Also, the phrase 'so with the e-book' is unclear and corrected to 'so I use e-books' for clarity.

× When I go to libraries, I usually borrow books that I want to read.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually borrow books that I want to read.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place the speaker usually visits.

× And sometimes I can make a copy of documents that I need because in libraries it is much cheaper to do.

✓ And sometimes I make copies of documents that I need because it is much cheaper to do so in libraries.

The phrase 'make a copy of documents' should be pluralized to 'make copies of documents'. Also, 'to do' should be followed by 'so' to complete the phrase 'do so'.

× I leave in the in a small town.

✓ I live in a small town.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'live' to indicate residence. Also, the phrase 'in the in a' is redundant and corrected to 'in a'.

× So sometimes I visit library but it wasn't big.

✓ So sometimes I visit the library, but it wasn't big.

The singular noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Also, a comma is added before 'but' to separate clauses.

× To tell the truth, I don't know, but I suppose that Chinese kids quite often go to the library because China has discipline and educational system.

✓ To tell the truth, I don't know, but I suppose that Chinese kids quite often go to the library because China has a disciplined and educational system.

The phrase 'has discipline and educational system' is missing the article 'a' before 'discipline' and 'educational system'. Also, 'discipline' should be 'disciplined' to correctly describe the system.