Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ "the" trước "library". Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends. In the mornings, I borrow books and research biology because I really like animals. I find the library to be a quiet place where I can study effectively.

提案: Bạn nên thêm mạo từ "the" trước "library" và tránh lặp từ như "borrow the books". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I usually go to the library to borrow books and complete my assignments because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my work.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu phức tạp không tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn đúng cách và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I grew up in the countryside in Vietnam, and there was no library nearby at that time.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh nói "I don't know" mà nên đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng mạo từ "the" trước "library" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "Chinese is a people" thành "Chinese people are". Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

例: I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese people value education and love to study.

× Yes, I often go to library at the weekends.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library at the weekends.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Mornings I go to borrow the books and research my biology because I really like animals and I think library is the quiet places to study.

✓ In the mornings, I go to borrow books and research biology because I really like animals and I think the library is a quiet place to study.

The sentence lacks proper word order and articles. 'Mornings' should be 'In the mornings' to indicate time. 'The books' is better as 'books' since it is general. 'My biology' is incorrect; it should be 'biology' as a subject. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Quiet places' should be singular 'a quiet place' to match the singular noun 'library'.

× I usually go to library to borrow the books and complete my assignment because it is a quiet place to focus on my work.

✓ I usually go to the library to borrow books and complete my assignment because it is a quiet place to focus on my work.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' as it refers to books in general, not specific ones.

× No, because I was lived and grew up in the countryside in Vietnam, so in that time it didn't have a library in my countryside to me to go to the library to borrow the books.

✓ No, because I lived and grew up in the countryside in Vietnam, so at that time there wasn't a library in my countryside for me to go to borrow books.

The phrase 'was lived' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'lived'. 'In that time' should be 'at that time'. 'It didn't have a library' is better expressed as 'there wasn't a library' to indicate existence. 'To me to go to the library' is awkward; 'for me to go to borrow books' is clearer. Also, 'the books' should be 'books'.

× I don't know because I am a Vietnamese kid but I think Chinese kids will often to go library because Chinese is a people that love to study.

✓ I don't know because I am a Vietnamese kid, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese people love to study.

The phrase 'will often to go library' is incorrect; it should be 'often go to the library'. 'Chinese is a people' is incorrect; 'Chinese people' is correct. Also, 'to the library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.