Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'I want to get a high school'는 의미가 명확하지 않으며, 문장 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 바꾸고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I have an important test on August 24th. I study hard there to prepare well.

提案: 'Somehow'는 이 문맥에 적절하지 않고, 'for just for fun'은 중복 표현입니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하고, 구체적인 활동을 추가하면 좋겠습니다.

例: I usually study with my textbook to prepare for the test, but sometimes I also read books for fun to relax.

提案: 'a library' 대신 'the library'를 사용해야 하며, 문장 연결이 조금 어색합니다. 좀 더 자연스럽게 문장을 연결하고, 구체적인 경험을 추가해 보세요.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading. My mom used to take me there so we could read books together.

提案: 'My friend Wang Ming is a Chinese'는 부자연스러운 표현입니다. 좀 더 자연스럽게 표현하고, 이유나 예시를 구체적으로 설명하면 좋겠습니다.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library. For example, my friend Wang Ming told me she visited the library frequently as a child because she enjoyed reading fairy tales.

× I want to get a high school.

✓ I want to get into a high school.

The phrase 'get a high school' is incorrect because 'high school' is a place or institution, not something you 'get'. The correct expression is 'get into a high school', meaning to be admitted or enrolled. This is an issue of incorrect use of quantifiers and collocations.

× my mom took me a library to read a book together.

✓ my mom took me to a library to read a book together.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'a library'. The correct phrase is 'took me to a library'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions error.

× My friend Wang Ming is a Chinese and she told me she went to the library very often when she was a child.

✓ My friend Wang Ming is Chinese and she told me she went to the library very often when she was a child.

The article 'a' before 'Chinese' is incorrect when referring to nationality as an adjective. 'Chinese' here is an adjective, so 'a' should be removed. This is an incorrect use of pronouns or determiners error.