Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me concentrate on my studies and complete my assignments."

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me concentrate better on my studies and complete my assignments on time.

提案: Make your answer more structured and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, "In the library, I usually work on my assignments and prepare for upcoming exams because it is a quiet place."

例: In the library, I usually work on my assignments and prepare for upcoming exams because it is a quiet place that helps me focus.

提案: Improve your answer by using correct tense and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details with linking words. For example, "Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. Although I was not very interested in reading books, I enjoyed looking at pictures and comics."

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. Although I was not very interested in reading books, I enjoyed looking at pictures and comics.

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons. For example, "Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them concentrate on their studies and improve their focus."

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them concentrate on their studies and improve their focus.

× Because library will help me to enhance my focus.

✓ Because the library will help me to enhance my focus.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required to specify it.

× It could focus what should I do, what should I done, what should I?

✓ It could help me focus on what I should do, what I should have done, and what I should do next.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Should I done' is incorrect; the correct form is 'should have done' (past participle). Also, 'It could focus' is unclear; it should be 'It could help me focus on'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb usage.

× Whenever I am in library I am answering my assignments or I am.

✓ Whenever I am in the library, I am answering my assignments or...

The sentence is incomplete and missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'answering my assignments' is awkward; 'working on my assignments' would be better, but since only grammar correction is requested, adding 'the' and completing the sentence is necessary.

× Practicing for or learning for my exam. Upcoming exam. What?

✓ I am practicing for or studying for my upcoming exam.

The phrase 'learning for my exam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'studying for my exam'. Also, 'upcoming exam' should be connected to the sentence properly. The sentence needs to be combined and clarified.

× Yes I go to the library when I was a kid but I'm not that fan of reading books but I am a fan of watching some pictures or the comics the that show in the books.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, but I wasn't that much of a fan of reading books; I was more a fan of looking at pictures or the comics that were in the books.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'I'm not that fan' should be 'I wasn't that much of a fan' to maintain past tense. 'Watching some pictures' is incorrect; 'looking at pictures' is appropriate. The sentence also needs punctuation for clarity.

× Probably yes, because all of us can go to the library to focus on what we should done, what we should focus because it help us to enhance our. Focus.

✓ Probably yes, because all of us can go to the library to focus on what we should do, what we should focus on because it helps us to enhance our focus.

'Should done' is incorrect; it should be 'should do' (base form after modal 'should'). Also, 'it help us' should be 'it helps us' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence also needs 'focus on' instead of just 'focus' for correct preposition usage.