Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa, misalnya gunakan 'often' bukan 'oftenly', dan gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih alami seperti 'I find it easier to read articles online or do tasks at home.'

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it easier to read articles online or do my tasks at home.

提案: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'also'. Contoh: 'I usually look for books related to my assignments, and sometimes I work on my writing tasks there because it's a quiet place.'

例: I usually look for books related to my assignments, and sometimes I work on my writing tasks there because it's a quiet place.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kata kerja, gunakan bentuk lampau yang tepat seperti 'wanted' dan perjelas maksud 'bubble books' jika itu salah ucap. Contoh: 'Not very often, but my parents used to take me to the library because they wanted to show me some picture books.'

例: Not very often, but my parents used to take me to the library because they wanted to show me some picture books.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan waktu, gunakan present tense yang konsisten dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'the the'. Contoh: 'I'm not sure, but when I visit the library, I often see Chinese kids with their parents or in groups.'

例: I'm not sure, but when I visit the library, I often see Chinese kids with their parents or in groups.

× No, I don't oftenly come to the library because I feel like it's more easy to read articles online or doing task at my home.

✓ No, I don't often come to the library because I feel like it's easier to read articles online or do tasks at my home.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'more easy' should be 'easier' to correctly form the comparative adjective. Additionally, parallel structure requires 'do tasks' instead of 'doing task'. Penjelasan: 'oftenly' bukan bentuk adverb yang benar, yang benar adalah 'often'. 'more easy' harus diganti menjadi 'easier' untuk membentuk komparatif yang benar. Struktur paralel juga harus diperbaiki menjadi 'do tasks' bukan 'doing task'.

× No, I don't oftenly come to the library because I feel like it's more easy to read articles online or doing task at my home.

✓ No, I don't often come to the library because I feel like it's easier to read articles online or do tasks at my home.

After 'or', the verb should be in the base form to maintain parallelism with 'read'. 'doing task' is incorrect; it should be 'do tasks' to match the structure. Penjelasan: Setelah 'or', kata kerja harus dalam bentuk dasar agar paralel dengan 'read'. 'doing task' salah, harus 'do tasks' agar sesuai struktur.

× I usually look for books related to my task or reading or writing and also sometimes I also work for my assignment and writing is safe.

✓ I usually look for books related to my tasks, reading, or writing, and sometimes I also work on my assignments; writing is safe.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and unclear meaning. 'or reading or writing' should be connected properly with commas and 'and'. 'work for my assignment' should be 'work on my assignments'. The phrase 'writing is safe' is unclear and may need clarification. Penjelasan: Kalimat memiliki konjungsi yang berlebihan dan makna yang tidak jelas. 'or reading or writing' harus dihubungkan dengan koma dan 'and'. 'work for my assignment' harus 'work on my assignments'. Frasa 'writing is safe' tidak jelas dan perlu klarifikasi.

× Not really often, but my parents used to bring me to the library because they want to show me a bubble books there.

✓ Not really often, but my parents used to bring me to the library because they wanted to show me some bubble books there.

Since 'used to' indicates past habit, the verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted'. Also, 'a bubble books' is incorrect; 'some bubble books' is appropriate for plural. Penjelasan: Karena 'used to' menunjukkan kebiasaan masa lalu, kata kerja 'want' harus dalam bentuk lampau 'wanted'. Juga, 'a bubble books' salah; 'some bubble books' tepat untuk jamak.

× Not really often, but my parents used to bring me to the library because they want to show me a bubble books there.

✓ Not really often, but my parents used to bring me to the library because they wanted to show me some bubble books there.

The phrase 'a bubble books' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'books'. It should be 'some bubble books' to correctly indicate plural. Penjelasan: Frasa 'a bubble books' mencampur artikel tunggal 'a' dengan kata benda jamak 'books'. Harusnya 'some bubble books' untuk menunjukkan jamak dengan benar.

× I'm not sure, but when I visit the the library I frequently saw them with their parents or with their groups.

✓ I'm not sure, but when I visit the library, I frequently see them with their parents or with their groups.

The phrase 'the the library' has a repeated article; one 'the' should be removed. Also, 'visit' is present tense, so 'saw' should be 'see' to maintain tense consistency. Penjelasan: Frasa 'the the library' mengandung artikel yang berulang; satu 'the' harus dihapus. Juga, 'visit' dalam bentuk sekarang, jadi 'saw' harus 'see' agar konsisten waktu.