Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and provides reasons, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and finishing your thoughts clearly within 4-5 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library every other day because the quiet environment helps me concentrate and be more productive. It allows me to complete my work without distractions, which I find very helpful.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and somewhat unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about the types of books you enjoy and your activities in the library.

例: I usually go to the library to complete assignments and study for tests. Besides my course books, I enjoy reading fictional novels because they help me relax and improve my imagination.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to speak more fluently and complete your ideas. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more confident and natural.

例: Yes, I often visited the American Embassy Library as a child because my mother encouraged me to read various types of books. I also loved the peaceful atmosphere there, which made reading enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is vague and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'as long as my opinion lasts' and finish your sentences properly.

例: I'm not completely sure, but I believe Chinese children are encouraged to use libraries frequently. Many schools promote reading, and libraries provide access to a wide range of books and learning materials.

× Also I can.

✓ Also, I can.

The sentence 'Also I can.' is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves readability, but the sentence still seems incomplete. It is better to complete the thought or remove it. However, based on the transcript, adding a comma is the minimal correction to meet the grammar problem type.

× I mostly visit the library to complete my assignments or whenever I have to study for my tests, but I also love going to library to explore new books.

✓ I mostly visit the library to complete my assignments or whenever I have to study for my tests, but I also love going to the library to explore new books.

The phrase 'going to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required.

× I except for my course books, I definitely enjoy fictional novels that I like to read.

✓ Except for my course books, I definitely enjoy fictional novels that I like to read.

The word 'except' was mistakenly written as 'I except', which is incorrect. Removing the pronoun 'I' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I always set my.

✓ I always set my study goals.

The sentence 'I always set my.' is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding a suitable object like 'study goals' completes the sentence and makes it meaningful.

× I used to visit the American Embassy Library, uh, when I was a kid because my mom would always encourage me to read books of different kinds, umm, something that is very rare in most cases.

✓ I used to visit the American Embassy Library, uh, when I was a kid because my mom would always encourage me to read books of different kinds, umm, which is very rare in most cases.

The phrase 'something that is very rare' is better replaced with 'which is very rare' to correctly refer to the previous clause. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I also love the ambience of that library because we used to have all these.

✓ And I also love the ambience of that library because we used to have all these resources.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'all these.' Adding a noun like 'resources' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I'm not certain about that, but as long as my opinion lasts, I think Chinese kids are always encouraged to explore their reading resources and I think they are very much exposed to libraries and to explore much more advanced.

✓ I'm not certain about that, but as far as my opinion goes, I think Chinese kids are always encouraged to explore their reading resources and I think they are very much exposed to libraries and to explore much more advanced materials.

The phrase 'as long as my opinion lasts' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'as far as my opinion goes'. Also, 'much more advanced' is incomplete and needs a noun like 'materials' to complete the thought.