Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, ensure grammatical accuracy, for example, say 'the library' instead of 'library'. Use a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

例: I don't go to the library as often as I would like nowadays. However, when I was younger, I visited the library very frequently because I loved reading books.

提案: Avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar such as 'the library is' instead of 'the library are'.

例: I usually read books in the library, especially my dental textbooks, because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Therefore, I prefer studying there for most of my dental studies.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences with appropriate linking words. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, but the books I read then were quite different. My mother used to take me there to borrow storybooks, and my favourites were the Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew series.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons.

例: Yes, most Chinese children often visit libraries because it is deeply ingrained in our culture. This habit helps inculcate a love for reading among kids from an early age.

× I used to visit library very very often.

✓ I used to visit the library very very often.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× as the library are generally very quiet, it helps me to concentrate.

✓ as the library is generally very quiet, it helps me to concentrate.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.