Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'land books' nên là 'lend books' hoặc 'borrow books'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài dòng.

例: Yes, I usually go to the library about twice a week during the school year to borrow books that help me with my studies.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'read book' nên là 'read books'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

例: The library at my school is quite small, so I usually just borrow books and take them home to read. Then, I return them after about a month.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'flexibilities' và 'an hour to tell'. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I lived in a small village without a library. I only started going to the library when I entered high school.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng từ không đúng như 'dare not handle love to reading'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

例: In China, children don't often go to libraries because there are only a few libraries in cities or towns. Most kids prefer reading comics or other entertainment materials instead.

× I usually go to the library in my school year.

✓ I usually go to the library during my school year.

The phrase 'in my school year' is incorrect because 'school year' is a countable noun and the preposition 'during' is more appropriate to indicate a period of time. Also, 'in my school year' is awkward; 'during my school year' is clearer.

× Like I go about two times a week to borrow or land books from libraries to obtain knowledge for my study at school.

✓ I go about two times a week to borrow or lend books from the library to obtain knowledge for my studies at school.

The word 'land' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lend'. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match the context. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic subjects.

× ...so we don't have a lot of space for the student to stay there and read book for long time.

✓ ...so we don't have a lot of space for students to stay there and read books for a long time.

'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple people. 'Book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books. 'Long time' needs the article 'a' to be 'a long time'.

× So I just go to borrow books and then I I'll pick it home and read then I will return for a month later.

✓ So I just go to borrow books, then I'll take them home to read, and I will return them a month later.

'Pick it home' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take them home'. Also, 'for a month later' should be 'a month later' without 'for'. The sentence is adjusted for clarity and correct future tense usage.

× No, I didn't 'cause when I was younger I lived in a small village.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was younger, I lived in a small village.

The contraction 'didn't 'cause' is informal and should be 'didn't because' in formal speech. Also, a comma is needed after 'younger' for clarity.

× We don't have a lot of flexibilities, so an hour to tell we don't have any library.

✓ We didn't have a lot of flexibility, so to be honest, we didn't have any library.

'Flexibilities' is incorrect; 'flexibility' is an uncountable noun and should be singular. 'An hour to tell' is incorrect and replaced with 'to be honest' for clarity. Also, tense is corrected to past to match context.

× In my country, kids don't usually go to library 'cause as I mention, like it's city or the town that have just about one or two libraries.

✓ In my country, kids don't usually go to the library because, as I mentioned, only cities or towns have just about one or two libraries.

'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'As I mention' should be past tense 'as I mentioned'. 'It's city or the town that have' is incorrect; it should be 'only cities or towns have' to agree in number.

× So the kids dare not handle love to reading.

✓ So the kids do not really love reading.

The phrase 'dare not handle love to reading' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'do not really love reading' to convey the intended meaning clearly.